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Ecirar 26 Jul, 2024 @ 2:03am
Mix of 1st and 2nd person
The use of 1st or 2nd person terms in the story sections appears to be fairly inconsistent , which can make reading it feel a little awkward.

In particular this seems to be an issue with the choices where sometimes it will use 'I' instead of 'You' outside of things that your character is directly saying.
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[ER] Raven  [developer] 27 Jul, 2024 @ 4:42am 
Thanks, Ecirar. Some choices you make are meant to be internal dialogue, or your thoughts, memories, etc., and not something you voice out loud. In those cases, they also have a different color. In any case, I'll check it out.
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