Nice .... not much more to say x3

Just as the classic AWSW: nice storytelling, brutal and with a pinch of special content. :D However... I got a little confused at the end of this section because so much happens in the short time, is this intentional? And when can we expect more content from you?

Originally posted by XST_905:

However... I got a little confused at the end of this section because so much happens in the short time, is this intentional? And when can we expect more content from you?

That was my intent to create a sense of confusion and some anxiety.

I will have to warn that I'm going to take a while before I release the full version. Phase 1 (the writing phase) is about three-fourths done, but I have many things in the background happening--I'm taking an AP course, I'm trying to get back into drawing, I'm working on getting my driver's license, I've got a job; and I hope I'm not sounding like a certain controversial simulator dev (frequently connected to a body-fluid challice). Then there's Phase 2: the drafting and finalizing phase. I'm hoping to have the entire thing done by this summer (in US times), but with how everything is going, it's unpredictable. I hope you understand :(

Eitherway, I'm glad you enjoyed and I hope that when the full novel is released, it will be worth the long wait :)

I appreciate it. There's no need to rush, especially with Covid-19 right now. Take your time, check everything twice and eventually we will see the results when it's done ;)

There's no frakin thumbs-up emote on steam, so I have to give you the ugly one I copied an pasted for you, sorry... None the less, 👍

I feel like I should mention this too:

The mature content in this novel will progressively get stronger as it goes on and I will have to split the novel in to a SFW version and NSFW version (it's mostly due to violence and sexuality) posted somewhere else.

If anyone would like a content warning before I finally start the full release later on, you can add me, DM me, and I'll lay out what you should expect. I seriously recommend it to people who might have trauma disorders as while some of the more shocking content is tame (for my sake as well), some of the content may still be triggering for others. So in all sincerity, lmk and I can even spoil things if you need further confirmation.

Thank you for enjoying this Beta chapter, though, and I hope you're all eager for the next chapters! :)

Now this whole thing is getting even more interesting...

this was very enjoyable to read, really good job

Thank you :)