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Kaaaaa (Banned) 16 Jul @ 3:21am
Theres a rhino loose in the city
And it goes around killing everyone and a detective has to solve the killings That would make for a good movie
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Jumanji x Sherlock Holmes
Kaaaaa (Banned) 16 Jul @ 3:25am 
Originally posted by St✩rlight:
But you've already spoiled the movie...
Not for the millions of people that will see it, just for you people
Last edited by Kaaaaa; 16 Jul @ 3:25am
Originally posted by St✩rlight:
But you've already spoiled the movie...
Twist: it was the butler who called the detective, all along.
It wouldn't last long around my town before it ended up being mounted on a wall.
Kaaaaa (Banned) 16 Jul @ 3:53am 
And the detective will have this hot woman reporter sort which will be the love interest
No Country For Lost Rhinos
no it wouldn't .... there would be nothing to solve . We live in an age where cctv cameras and door cams exist. People would instantly spot the rhino and some old guy with a shot gun would just shoot it. The detective would find out within a day that it was a rhino on the lose. Not to mention everyone has phones these days and record everything. No detective is going to be searching for bodies for months or years trying to solve a case involving a rhino.

That idea sounds like it was generated by AI . That's bad writing because it doesn't make sense . You'd need to add like 5 layers of fiction and come up with a creative plot that would rival a 20 season anime to even make that idea a success .

The main issue with your idea is that it has plot holes .... plot holes pulls the viewer out of the story and ruins surrealism . The issue is the fact that the movie would end before it even gets started .
Don't take this too seriously but that idea sounds like it was made for a " mOdErN aUdIeNcE "
Originally posted by St✩rlight:
Yeah, okay. Try shooting a rhino with a shotgun and see what happens.
I already know what happens the animal dies . Not sure if you look at too many netflix movies but I'm guessing you think a bullet can't kill a rhino. You do know some people hunt rhinos and shoot them for a living right ? We know exactly what happens .
Originally posted by St✩rlight:
You need a big rifle with like .600 Overkill rounds. Even then, you need a clean heart shot.
laughs in saitamaese .
it could work if the detective finds the rhino in the first 5 minutes of the film and it : Talks , transports him to some other world , gives the detective an ability , or its some shape shifting creature . Something that goes the fantasy route would be best suited for an idea like that . I mean if the detective really can't figure out whats going on ... maybe something about the rhino is other worldly that can branch off into a bunch of unique ideas .
Kaaaaa (Banned) 16 Jul @ 10:24am 
Originally posted by Green&GoldSagii's:
no it wouldn't .... there would be nothing to solve . We live in an age where cctv cameras and door cams exist. People would instantly spot the rhino and some old guy with a shot gun would just shoot it. The detective would find out within a day that it was a rhino on the lose. Not to mention everyone has phones these days and record everything. No detective is going to be searching for bodies for months or years trying to solve a case involving a rhino.

That idea sounds like it was generated by AI . That's bad writing because it doesn't make sense . You'd need to add like 5 layers of fiction and come up with a creative plot that would rival a 20 season anime to even make that idea a success .

The main issue with your idea is that it has plot holes .... plot holes pulls the viewer out of the story and ruins surrealism . The issue is the fact that the movie would end before it even gets started .
Its an invisible rhino that only comes out at night and it mutated due to a leak at the lab
Originally posted by Kaaaaa:
And it goes around killing everyone and a detective has to solve the killings That would make for a good movie

Which city?
Kaaaaa (Banned) 16 Jul @ 10:26am 
Originally posted by Emperor Prussia:
Originally posted by Kaaaaa:
And it goes around killing everyone and a detective has to solve the killings That would make for a good movie

Which city?
London
Originally posted by Kaaaaa:
Originally posted by Emperor Prussia:

Which city?
London

Not my problem then, lol.
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