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Kip 2 Feb, 2017 @ 4:04pm
Feedback on my live action Film Studies portfolio Film for University acceptance
It is now time to reveal my short film entry for acceptance to Ryerson University's Film Studies program "Man with Desired Box Runs"! The program is extremely competitive with around 1300 students applying each year, and only 89 spots available. Maxwell Sims and I did the acting / filming because nobody else was available to help. The short had to be about "Crossing Boundaries" and a maximum length of 90 seconds. Any feedback or support is much appreciated!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dn6Isc9Y5Eg
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Frosty 2 Feb, 2017 @ 4:35pm 
I suggest making the sound effects louder. Doors opening/closing, box falling, feet moving, etc.. Recording some custom sounds in controlled environments could make the film more vibrant with cenimatic standards. Overall, very ironic ending and I wish you the best of luck with this!
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Kip 2 Feb, 2017 @ 5:31pm 
Thanks!
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XxX.ac_quy_gaming.XxX 4 Feb, 2017 @ 8:22am 
make the voice of the narrator more dramatic, move your camera more often, not just let it stand in one place
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Kip 5 Feb, 2017 @ 9:22pm 
thanks!
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