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Your Loving Father 3 Apr, 2017 @ 2:30pm
Help me improve!
https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=897960659

This is one of my first times trying this style of SFM art, and one of my more recent renders! Any tips on lighting and facial expression are welcome!

Please don't mind the poor Chroma Key job, this was done at like 3 AM lol
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Ballantyne 22 Apr, 2017 @ 10:49pm 
The lighting and angle is good, but you should try and pose his lips around the cigar so it doesn't clip through his face.
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Your Loving Father 23 Apr, 2017 @ 2:03am 
Originally posted by Ballantyne:
The lighting and angle is good, but you should try and pose his lips around the cigar so it doesn't clip through his face.
Thank you very much!~ I'll be sure to do that the next time I do a piece like this.
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