Hey, after watching many tutorials and advises and stuff I started to work on my own video, something I wanted to do for a long LONG time. Need some feedback on this video for improvement and overall feel/look. I made it in slow motion because the video I'm working on is gonna be slow-mo. Here's my first attempts at SFM:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V5hVVgwNmZ4