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eric 6 Feb, 2015 @ 8:23pm
Meet the Market Gardner
I know, it looks ♥♥♥♥♥♥. I only have 73 hours into SFM so it's going to look ugly.




https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0I2mh4FqPIs




But I'd love some constructive feedback I can use for the next animation.
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CommunistFry 18 Mar, 2015 @ 2:49pm 
In my point of view, I felt that the animation was done very well, especially in 73 hours. The only problem that I had was the part when soldier did his laugh. I felt that his facial expression was over emphasized, and it did look very odd. Other than that, everything was well-put, well-animated, and very humorous.
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eric 18 Mar, 2015 @ 3:04pm 
Originally posted by TBFilmz:
In my point of view, I felt that the animation was done very well, especially in 73 hours. The only problem that I had was the part when soldier did his laugh. I felt that his facial expression was over emphasized, and it did look very odd. Other than that, everything was well-put, well-animated, and very humorous.

I couldn't help but rewatching my old animation and thank you for giving me feedback. I'm very surprised at the difference between what I can do now compared to what I did back then.

Again, thanks for the feedback!
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