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A Weird Cat 28 Mar, 2013 @ 7:16pm
[SFM] Rain
I know there's some bad animation,because i am really tired while making it,
Please post a comment! To help me improve!
Thank you
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BcA04-ivq_Y
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Jakob 30 Mar, 2013 @ 1:53pm 
Well done! The lipsync was pretty great, but the body animation seemed a bit awkward. For example the head would move down by itself, and clip into the neck. The camera work was a bit much aswell. The camera moved around a lot; and even went out of focus at some points. Just keep practicing, and you'll get better. This is a great video though. Keep on keepin'. :)
Last edited by Jakob; 30 Mar, 2013 @ 1:54pm
A Weird Cat 30 Mar, 2013 @ 8:26pm 
Thank you! Advice taken! :)
I will do better next time!
Etmer 31 Mar, 2013 @ 2:22am 
This is a nice video! I'm still learning myself, though I have to agree with Darken. I would like it if the body moved to the beat, in a way (but its just a personal opinion!). I guess Max's "Money" can make an example for that (though, remember that he used kinect for his).

Other than that, great video! How did you get the "feel" of the video to be dramatic at parts like 2:32 btw? (in a lighting fashion)
Last edited by Etmer; 31 Mar, 2013 @ 2:22am
A Weird Cat 31 Mar, 2013 @ 2:31am 
Originally posted by Etmer the Sentry ツ:
This is a nice video! I'm still learning myself, though I have to agree with Darken. I would like it if the body moved to the beat, in a way (but its just a personal opinion!). I guess Max's "Money" can make an example for that (though, remember that he used kinect for his).

Other than that, great video! How did you get the "feel" of the video to be dramatic at parts like 2:32 btw? (in a lighting fashion)


Do you mean the Colour correction?
Etmer 31 Mar, 2013 @ 6:36pm 

Indeed >w<
Last edited by Etmer; 31 Mar, 2013 @ 6:36pm
A Weird Cat 31 Mar, 2013 @ 8:16pm 
I made the color correction myself so,its abit hard to explain how to do it,can you add me by the way,so we could talk more ( i added you :3)
Hobotron 1 Apr, 2013 @ 1:20pm 
I already had this title for one of my videos (very very shitty) X). Very good video though
A Weird Cat 1 Apr, 2013 @ 7:48pm 
Originally posted by Hobotron:
I already had this title for one of my videos (very very shitty) X). Very good video though

I am sorry that i didn't notice that,my fault,do you want me to change it?
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