Hello Open Source Filmmaker,

I haven't touched SFM for nearly a year & I'm currenly working on a new poster. I would like some constructive critique on:

• Camera angle
  
• Facial expressions
  
• Pose
  
• Scene build (I used a flatvoid map and used the "fake building" props from koth_king
  
• Lighting
  
• Other details (could there be more background elements like sewage pipes? trash?)

Click to see poster sample:Poster link[i883.photobucket.com]

I still have to do post-processing work in Photoshop (or After Effects) such as ballistics and giving the poster a "noir" look.

Thank you.