Originally posted by The UplinkExperiment:

-mech I have this idea for either a normal puzzle or on-rails segment, it basically has a door (unfrozen and standing upright) with a prop (anything really) that's on fire.

With an explosive barrel above it on a breakable pole/shelf, So you have to shoot the pole to make the barrel drop so it can burn and explode.

For an on-rails segment it could be a test of the player's accuracy while moving.

Sounds interesting. How would you make the on-rails section work?

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2522907934

Not a action save, but it looks fantastic.

Originally posted by Monokma:

I REALLY want feedback on this, since I really want to perfect this to put in a save somewhere.
https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2411208017

The platforms are a bit too far away to make jumps and the no gravity ones cause you fall off them.

Originally posted by Monokma:

I would like some feedback on this save.

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2393392513

Really good use of the Maps geometry. Liked the backtracking.
The use of Tcobooks was a nice touch that added to the story.
RIP Romeo.

Originally posted by TheBruhGuy:

Oh, ill see if i can find it and fix it sometime

Doing so would help.

Originally posted by Monokma:

Found this in the last entry of the Cybertrooper Series:
https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2344007692

Tinevni egue.


Cnun metnerruc sutas nac sov.

Originally posted by samuel.wario05:

and yes i literally threw together that poorly made example room JUST for this screenshot in about 10 minutes or so.

Not a bad room.
Yeah, that's what I was talking about.

Originally posted by TheBruhGuy:

not quite sure what you mean by " cuts in geometry " Could you maybe send a screenshot of a example?

As in the parts of the map don't link together and have gaps in them. Rather immersion breaking.

Originally posted by Noa:

Would LOVE feedback on this.

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2371742378

Ok, here's a rough review of the series:

+Enjoyable combat.
+Good use of the addons, especially the HL2 tools.
+Nice use of some lighting.
+Materials very fine.
+Wiremod sounds were a nice touch.

-Can see some cuts in the geometry.
-Not much of an effort made to cover up the rest of flatgrass.
-Part 3 seemed a bit unnecessary. Could of been fused with part 4.

Best parts were probably the last two. Decent length with tough but fair combat.

Ooh, this is going to take some time.