Автор сообщения: colonel barrage

Автор сообщения: HeRp-A-dErP-a-NErp.eXe

Just a nitpick but you should probably just change this mission's name to something else because it's name is now just long gone from what it's original intention was. "Spiral Slaughter" doesn't make sense for this mission anymore.

the areas themselves when connected shapes like a spire in my opinion
no

That isn't why at all. The name came from when the mission only took place in the first area, the first area is shaped like a spiral hence the name spiral slaughter. Now it's nowhere near that name because the rest of the mission opens up like a regular Doppler mission. I played the older versions and I very well know the mission's original intentions. You don't have to rename it but I recommend doing it because the mission's name no longer makes sense now that the mission is played now like a regular doppler mission.

VERSION 9: https://www.dropbox.com/s/yiiobvyym6vl5i5/Mountain%20Mayhem.zip?dl=0
Overall

• Template Updates.

Download the scout_pop icon and the vmts INCLUDED with this mission.
I would like interrobang to be excluded from this mission.

VERSION 8: https://www.dropbox.com/s/68apya75r2k4cj0/CC%20Gatebot%20Apocalypse%20And%20Icons.zip?dl=0
Wave 5

• Replaced Giant Burst Fire Soldiers with a different type of Giant Rapid Burst Fire Soldier.

Wave 6

• Remade the wave.
  
• Added medic_overheal_uber_giant

I want interrobang to be excluded from this mission.
Update your icons.

I'm not a judge but feel free to take them to consideration.
Overall: It's quite silly you're using caustic icons and not giving every caustic bot a caustic icon, very inconsistent there. You could probably ask Jakapoa to make you some animated caustic icons for your demos or whatever bots need them.
Wave 1: You really shouldnt use those giant scouts at the end. They are a huge contradiction to what Giant Scouts are supposed to be and they just seem so pointless, and they feel like they are only there to add more time. The only Giant Scout that should ever be slow are armored sandmens. You can simply replace them with some other giant or remove them.
Wave 2: Fine by me.
Wave 3: Fine by me.
Wave 4: Fine by Me.
Wave 5: Finale could be shortened a bit.
Wave 6: Random heavy support icons not stacked, both were regular heavy icons. There wasn't even Heavy Support.

I'm not a judge so this is just my own opinion, feel free to use them for your mission.
Wave 1: Was slow and repetitive. It seems it only got to be 4 minutes because of how slow spawn times where. You could honestly have two sentries (as two of the three judges said) and have those beat the wave, it felt like a wave for Normal.
Wave 2: No problem here.
Wave 3: Finale with 3 Giant Heavies was too much, space them out more or only have two of them active/remove one.
Wave 4: Rename your gas passer Pyros to "Gas Passer Pyro" if they don't have a custom name.
Wave 5: Good for me.
Wave 6: Use Final Tank Skin for last tank.

Just a nitpick but you should probably just change this mission's name to something else because it's name is now just long gone from what it's original intention was. "Spiral Slaughter" doesn't make sense for this mission anymore.

VERSION 8: https://www.dropbox.com/s/la2dkbjb4jz0og1/Mountain%20Mayhem.zip?dl=0
WAVES 4 AND 5

• Buffing.

Download the scout_pop icon and the vmts for this mission.
I would like to be present. Even if I'm not online just message me through the group chat PMs and go on without me, I'll see it when I get online.
No interrobangs allowed

VERSION 7: https://www.dropbox.com/s/dkjndra6z54kioc/Mountain%20Mayhem.zip?dl=0
Fixed a bricks.

Download the scout_pop icon and the vmts for this mission.
I would like to be present. Even if I'm not online just message me through the group chat PMs and go on without me, I'll see it when I get online.
No interrobangs allowed

VERSION 6: https://www.dropbox.com/s/cyc9j0y0kg2ft7h/Mountain%20Mayhem.zip?dl=0
OVERALL

• Ported the mission to Steep.

Download the scout_pop icon and the vmts for this mission.
I would like to be present. Even if I'm not online just message me through the group chat PMs and go on without me, I'll see it when I get online.
No interrobangs allowed

VERSION 7: https://www.dropbox.com/s/1eu3pp9izgd677p/CC%20Gatebot%20Apocalypse%20And%20Icons.zip?dl=0
Template updates.
I want interrobang to be excluded from this mission.
Do not use the panic button as it disrupts the flow of the waves.
Update your icons.