Overall: Cut the cash payout from waves 4-7 in half.

Word of advise: Solotest your missions or do public testing before submitting a mission, there were a lot of issues with this mission and some good ideas but were executed poorly since it wasnt tested first.

Wave 1: Replace the mittens with a bot that can shoot.
Crit Battalions is questionable for wave 1 but its fine for now.

Wave 2: Start is too easy and slow. Engineers can pick up bomb. Make the samurais come at the start with black boxes and blasts. Make mini-giant brass beasts regular brass beasts.

Wave 3: Remove your watered down move speed from Giant Shotgun Heavies, removing their gimped move speed also wont work as how many are active, you may have to just use another giant. Spies spawn way too fast and spawn too many of them. Remove the gimped move speed from the Giant Charged Soldiers and make their Giant Medics, the regen variant, or a group of small uber medics.

Wave 4: Giant Back Burner Pyros are too slow, make them move at 0.5. Giant Escape plan bosses are too slow. Too much cash is being given.

Wave 5: Too much money is being given. Double the HP of the tank. Banner trio is underwhelming, needs more support.Space Giant Deflector Heavies out, finale felt meh but again, we have way too much money.

You dont need to use soldier_banner_trio, it's an optional icon.

Wave 6: Make the Sir Nukes alot shoot slow, it's a nuke boss, nukers need to fire really slow.
Giant HOK support has very weak heal on kill for giants, make them heal 1k HP.

Wave 7: Remove 9 Chief Conch Soldiers. Conch bosses refused to leave spawn.

Map Feedback:

Personally, the front is very unfriendly for snipers, with all the props blocking everything, but that's just me.

Spy Bots can spawn inside of red team's spawn.

We really didn't like the bots taking all these flank routes.

Teleporters on a map like this is really questionable with how small it is. Bots weren't even taking them as well.

Advanced Mission Feedback:

Overall: Give your custom giants, giant footstep sounds. Not all of them had them atleast. Look at Valve's robot_giant.pop for reference on how giants should be made with character attributes.

Wave 1: Was pretty much Intermediate.

Wave 2: First half was Intermediate.

Wave 3: Replace Giant Burst Fire at end with a regular Giant Burst Fire, the 2x damage variant wiped us out.

Wave 4: Reduce tank HP by 1-2k. The Shortstop Scout support wasn't good as we have to deal with constant mini-giants on a small map, not only that but Shortstop Scouts are really fast. Either replace them or reduce them to 1.

Wave 5: Make the boss not have a large smoke explosion. Remove his Giant Medics.

Wave 6: Giant Soda Poppers jump way too much. Personally I think they would be better off not jumping at all.
Remove one Giant Medic from each spammer, remove one group of them (so there's only two spammer soldiers), and space these two Giant Soldiers out.

Wave 7: Take away deflector support with the bosses, make them spawn when the boss dies.
Make the Best Bud Soldier use a regular soldier icon.
Make Giant Medics on Black Boxes Regen and space them out more.
Personally, cut the Giant Brass portion of the wave and end the wave off at the giant black boxes.
You'll also need to give the previous tank the final tank skin if you decide to make this change.

TO DO LIST:

Balance the adv mission.

Make an intermediate.

Add more relays for mission makers.

Reartpass the map to be more high techy for the transmission theme.

Wave 1: Too easy, finale felt adv.
Wave 2: Same as wave 1
Wave 3: Same as waves 1 and 2. Give giant Crit-on-Kills more support
Wave 4: Tank was awkward, should have spawned with Giant Soldiers?
Wave 5: Giant huo Deflectors should have a U-clanka, they are deflectors after all.
Wave 6: Sandmans felt pointless at start. Your kritz meds at finale insta heal. I personally dont like it but the others didn't have issues with it.
Demo: https://demos.potato.tf/judging/mvm_meltdown_rc4_adv_fusion_intrusion_1561598682.dem

MAP FEEDBACK:

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1782208255
Robots tend to get stuck on this rock, there's something janky going on with the nav here.

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1782208648
This fence has an issue, at first I thought it was a nodraw but apparently tilted brushes can sometimes make VBSP confused on how to cut brushes up, causing odd cuts like this.

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1782225938
Double Sentries

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1782230573
This Engie nest gets hidden by the tree's leaves.
On the topic of engie nests, every engie building is floating way above the ground, you need to lower them to ground level.

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1782230663
Giants got stuck here for a good 10 seconds from this teleporter

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1782233301
https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1782233463
These teleporter beacons are heavily broken. One appears out of nowhere near another one when there is clearly only one teleporter.

(Wasn't paying much attention to the adv mission as I was focusing more on the map)
ICONS:

Now for the adv mission, the icons need to be standardized like they were in intermediate.(Flare barrage needs to be flare rainer and longbow needs to be regular bowmen)

Your rapid fire conch icon isnt needed because a conch spammer icon already exists.

Explosive sniper icon already exists.

The woodsman Heavy icon doesn't convey what the bot is, just use stock heavy icon.

Your blue mittens icons aren't going to fly because well, why make a duplicate of an already existing icon in the game files?

--- Missing Vgui material vgui/../hud/leaderboard_class_scout_chief_bonk_fast_blink_sgtc

ADV Mission:
You're using the flanking way too much, especially giants.
Giant Uber Meds end up dying way too early to get any chance to pop uber, they pop at 54 HP, that's very low for a giant to pop at making giant uber meds mostly useless unless modified to pop earlier.
Wave 7: This boss is really never going to work. To force players back to the hatch so engies can set up teles to a super scout and force them to bodyblock the boss is just a big no no.

Here's the demo: https://demos.potato.tf/judging/mvm_maplehill_b3_adv_sawdust_storage_1561593762.dem

VERSION 8: https://www.dropbox.com/s/35594qj1swy3unu/Storm%20Surge.zip?dl=0


Overall

• Template updates

Wave 2

• Replaced Armored Major Leagues with Giant Scouts
  
• Removed 6 straggler Heavy and Pyros.

Wave 4

• Cut some straggler Heavies and removed 5 straggler Pyros

Wave 5

• Fixed icon stacking.
  
• Removed the stragglers.

Wave 6

• Removed 8 Comfy Heavies from the start.

• Please ping me or message me when my mission is being tested, whether I'm online or not so I can be there.

VERSION A4: https://www.dropbox.com/s/ntoauhm7lgv32gw/mvm_transmission.zip?dl=0

• Added even more detail to the map.

VERSION A3D: https://www.dropbox.com/s/ntoauhm7lgv32gw/mvm_transmission.zip?dl=0

• Added a teletank.
  
• Added more detail to the mid area.
  
• Made the container at front larger to help with being attacked from above.
  
• Added a box at the very front to make it easier to get from top to bottom faster.

• Template updates.
  
• Nerfed support on wave 6.

bump up

VERSION A3C: https://www.dropbox.com/s/ntoauhm7lgv32gw/mvm_transmission.zip?dl=0

• Added detail to the hatch area.