Strike One

Demo File[testing.potatomvm.tf]
(if the demo doesn't play, rename it to something shorter then try to play it again)

Please make sure to watch the demo for detailed opinions from both judges and testers. Also playtest this mission a couple of times before you decide to submit the fix. It's the best way to avoid strikes later on. Don't get discouraged now!

Engineer (the fat)
Demoman (Bazooks)
Soldier (Seelpit)
Pyro (WildjaydogG03)
Scout (PDA Expert)
Sniper (Regi_Jazz_Mann)

Wave 2:
Sniper (Regi_Jazz_Mann) -> Sniper (Skin King)

-My teammates really disliked the Support 1 bots on every wave, but for me it was extra annoying, because it made me babysit the bomb every wave. On top of that in some waves it caused pacing issues. Support 1 wavespawns can be a real nuisance, it's best to not overuse them much. I'd suggest removing them on some of the waves

-Good wave

-Pacing issues, mainly in the second subwave (probably connected to the Support 1, but i saw some conch+heavy squads getting funky)

-Pacing issues throughout the entire wave, can't really remember when but the demo will point it out for you

-Good wave

-Good wave

-The battalions made this wave a little bit hard, please consider reducing their numbers, and as a extra safety measure, it'd be wise to remove their crits too. You can add them back later if the lack of crits made the subwaves too easy.
-The support issue really shines bright in this wave, with 4 different bots this becomes a wild ride fast.
-The boss's name doesn't really fit the anticipation it provides. Give it some flashy name.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/vp26fha30kki71k/mvm_silentsky_event_rc4b_exp_death_con_one.pop?dl=0


-Buffed various subwaves

-Buffed the first and last subwave

-Fixed straggling issues
-Nuke doesn't make you deaf anymore

For more detailed changes, check the bottom of the popfile.

Oops, I forgot to say but there will be one more session to get the demo for review. Silly me.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/okssf57ysxk2yj6/Silentsky%20Exp%20Death%20Con%20One.zip?dl=0

Difficulty: Expert

Custom Upgrades? No

Re-balances to weapons and/or classes? No

Blacklisted upgrades, items, or classes? No

Other restrictions or major changes? No

Requests:
-No Shield
-Run with a Heavy at least once
-Run with a Spy at least once
-I want meatloaf97 or CreatorForce (both if possible) to be present during a judging session if they are avaliable (not necessary, if they can't attend, launch the session regardless)

No Strike

No Demo File (mission maker was present during the session in spectator)

Demo (the fat)
Pyro (Package O' Lies)
Scout (MIKObscura)
Soldier (Katzenwerfer)
Engi (Paneglria)
Heavy (Lemony)


-The council of three present judges agreed that this mission would be ready for a demo review if changes listed below are implemented. I would also say that wave 6 is fucking incredible. I applaud your creativity.


-Remove 2 Demomen (stragglers)

-Good wave

-Either remove the first giant medic or make it's support less of a threat

-Good wave

-Nothing from me, but:
*SPEC* PDA Expert : give the boss a voice pitch scale which is equal to to the voicelines produced by the pointtemplates

-Incredible wave

I would like to inform you that this mission will be automatically rejected in 1 week if no further revisions are posted here.

Oprindeligt skrevet af Space Jockey:

I suppose that, once I make these changes, it's good to go?

Considering you gotta rework an entire wave, not for passing. It still needs some work

No Strike

Demo File[testing.potatomvm.tf]

Soldier (the fat)
Medic (Perper)
Engineer (Lemony)
Demo (Regi_Jazz_Man)
Scout (Yoovy)
Pyro (PDA Expert)



Wave 2
Demo (Regi_Jazz_Man) ---> Demo (washy)
(yes we tested with 5 judges, but there was nothing we could do, sorry about that)


-The Ghost Ship makes it so bots come immediately after spawning. While this makes the mission shorter overall, it gives the players no time to react to incoming threats. Please remove the ship. (also I couldn't see it for some reason)

-Good wave

-Good wave

-The speed gimmick, while interesting, might steamroll randoms with the usage of Super Scouts and the panic tank, due to the margin of error being smaller overall. The wave should be remade so that the speed gimmick is more forgiving or the speed gimmick being removed outright, your call.
-Wheel of Fate Explanation text says "on this wave and later waves" even though it's only present on Wave 3. Please reword that explanation text if you decide to keep the speed gimmick.

-The Super Bushwacka Snipers have no icon that would indicate their increased speed. If the icon doesn't exist, please make an icon that would indicate that.

-The wave was very spammy near the end. Consider removing crits from the Giant Burst Demomen and removing the Giant Medics from Giant Pyros.

-The boss gave no rage, consider giving him "rage giving scale" 0.1 instead

No Strike

Demo File[testing.potatomvm.tf]


Pyro (CreatorForce)
Engineer (the fat)
Medic (RC Polygons)
Demoman (PDA Expert)
Soldier (roblox.fortknight.2015)
Scout (rafradek)



Mission showed no balancing issues, the only thing that prevented it's passing was a little bit of stragglers.



-Remove one Giant Demoknight

-Remove two Giant Burst Fire Soldier