Floating Point

Floating Point

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A Floating Point Story
By Fae Boy
A story of how I think this little red dot came to be.
   
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The Story
The story of the Red Dot...

Redot was a dot, yes a dot, but he didn't do what you think he does.
He used to live alot like us, in a small house with nothing but a bed,
fridge and Television, he played games and chilled with his friends.
But one day something terrible happend... Redot was playing a game
but then a huge explosion suddenly happend with no warning at all,
it was gigantic bright, red and it covered the entire city Redot
lived in. After days had passed, Redot discovered something... the
gigantic bright red ball that was surrounding the city was changing something...
all the buildings were slowly falling apart but the pieces never fell.
They floated in mid-air... Redot was worried and decided to try and do
something, so he headed to the far east part of the City, it's here that
Redot was born, and he checked upstairs if he could find something
that he thought of in his mind, he checked the cupboards and shelves
and finally he found something metal that was crawling on the ground,
he moved to it and touched it. It made an electrical sound and then
it blew up infront of Redot. Redot was confused and walked out with
pieces of the Robot thing. When he moved outside the whole city was
nearly in pieces and red glowing objects were suddenly glowing in
various places... Redot ran back to his house and saw that it was gone.
Redot was scared and just walked on the street, wherever he went no
one was there, everything was gone, just floating pieces of buildings and
metal were all that was left... then all of a sudden another explosion
happend near him and water poured everywhere he walked too...
Redot was terrified and didn't know what was happening. He kept on
walking then he found a building that was still half intact, he went into it
and found an extremely bright red glowing string lying on one of the
counters in the building. He picked it up and it just started glowing
brighter and brighter when it just vaporized and it's dust went into
Redot's body... something was happening to Redot. His arms and legs
suddenly retracted into his body and turned to dust, he felt like
something was making him stronger, he looked to a wall and concentrated
on it, then shockingly a long bright glowing red string shot out of his body
and grabbed the wall, Redot used it to swing outside and when he got outside...
there was nothing left except dust, floating pieces of buildings and
water... it was oblivion... but something even worse just happend.
Enormous red bars suddenly started breaking out of the ground whenever
Redot swang on something. They seemed to grow larger whenever Redot
swang for a long period of time. Redot tried touching one of them and
it dissapeared then he got a vision of life and normality again. Redot just layed there...
not knowing what or why this happend, he stared out into nothing, just
dust... pieces of buildings... water... but then Redot said to himself.
He can't just let this go unpunished, he jumped off the floating
brick and swang to another bar... this, is how Redot became.....
The Floating Point.

Thank you for reading my story! It probably needs alot of changes and work.
But It's my way of imagining how this all happend. I hope you enjoyed reading it!
26 Comments
明朝事与孤烟冷 7 Jul, 2018 @ 5:50pm 
great!
Æðelflead Ðe Bad At ðis Game 16 Feb, 2018 @ 11:11am 
good story, entertaining:steamhappy:
Mrs. Claus 27 Dec, 2017 @ 12:56pm 
i like it storys like this are what kindle the fire in hearts creating that single everlasting flame the more you read the larger and more hot it gets makeing you feel stronger untill you end then you start looking for more but you can't find it so the flame burns out and you feel sad and lonely again. This story is on point :missiontarget:
ruumi MD 6 Aug, 2016 @ 5:00pm 
Great story!
rudy 27 May, 2016 @ 3:51pm 
Its nice.It was sad at some points and I fell like something's stuck in my neck






Sunkaster 30 Nov, 2015 @ 9:49am 
100000000,11/10 = best
Griffin 18 Sep, 2015 @ 5:12pm 
EPIC!
ming bag 5 Aug, 2015 @ 2:20pm 
1/10 needed more sex
EviePoppy 3 Aug, 2015 @ 11:41am 
Love it! :steamsad:
Drekadóttir 28 Jun, 2015 @ 10:23am 
Sad4Dayz