My fault I messed this one up, hopefully next year I can win you guys' vote!

Great plot.

Animation needs more polishing, missed a few gunshots sound effects.

It would've been definitely Yes if the Animations were great

Really, too dark couldn't see anything. Animations were sloppy and choppy (things going threw characters) Sounds were missing. Holding book backwards, cuts were sometimes fuzzy. Lips didnt even match voices and most of all WASNT EVEN FUNNY! This isn't a kids contest people come on...

All of what Knusperfrosch said, and you should've perfected the animations.

The beginning is very dark; even if it's supposed to be in a cellar, why would people stand around in a cellar without turning on the lights?
Yes movement animations look rather choppy, the lipsynch on the Pauling model looked rather odd.
At the 2 minute mark I was still not quite sure what the story was here. A lot of scenes felt superfluous, like the Engineer in the van with the... cheese?

Animations felt rushed in a lot of parts, a lot of missing sound effects, and the camera angels changed weird. There seems to be a lot of unfinished projects this year. :(

I rushed it a lot near the end too, spent too much time trying to get the story right.

Animations are okay, but there's a huge lack of sound effects