Okay, I'm not fond of "official map remakes" so I'm going to do a short review.

It's not very good IMO.
You placed some grapples there and there with your specific strats in mind which aren't even very effective. It's closed to self made strats.
You managed to render some strats even slower than it used to be. Even killing some paths.

I have in mind that this is your first map so I'll stay nice.
You (generally speaking) should stay away from official map modifications and start creating your very own map. This will allow you to think out of the box and to make awesome stuffs.

Thank you for your feedback :P

I am pretty sure I know which parts you mean and they are all possible to go through there fast. Or if you are first you will never be effected by the laser. And the spikes with the wheel also still are on the fastest way and you get no boost if you go there

Ok maybe I will do one map myself one day but not sure as I think it is very hard o.O

Originally posted by pandAliceous:

Thank you for your feedback :P

I am pretty sure I know which parts you mean and they are all possible to go through there fast. Or if you are first you will never be effected by the laser. And the spikes with the wheel also still are on the fastest way and you get no boost if you go there

Ok maybe I will do one map myself one day but not sure as I think it is very hard o.O

Start with a simple base and add stuff without overcrowding it, don't get demotivated when your first maps will end up sucking.


Casper wrote a guide on the basics of a good map, i recommend giving it a read.