Warframe

Warframe

Octavia Diva
FatWolfBooty 28 Oct, 2017 @ 2:04am
Unbiased critique
(Because there's a lot of biased, angery, 'weeb' haters it seems)

Obviously inspired by anime, but designed in a way that very truly sticks to the warframe aesthetic. Despite being one of the more austentatious and 'out there' items in the steam workshop, I believe both octavia skin and polearm skin look like they would belong in the universe, however I do have a couple of gripes.

The first would be the texture of the tails. The tails look a little unfinished (though not all that bad) and could use a redesign of texture, or perhaps even a full redesign to resemble the same materials Nezha's tails are made from.

The second being how the tail bases just float there so far away. I get theres plenty of high tech in the Warframe universe, it could easily be possible, but it looks/feels unfinished. Moving the bases a bit closer to her actual head would make a big difference in my opinion, or even moving up right against her helmet. They're just to far out there.

Despite all that, you've done fantastic work here, it really deserves a place in the game, and I hope it gets it.
Last edited by FatWolfBooty; 28 Oct, 2017 @ 2:08am
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VioletChainsaw 3 Nov, 2017 @ 6:19pm 
I like this critique, it makes sense. Yea the tails are starting to look like a solid shape to me rather than something like energy. It might need something like prisma effect or another energy type in the game, would make it really stand out. Oh, and it could probably be transperant as well.
Last edited by VioletChainsaw; 3 Nov, 2017 @ 6:19pm
DBlueDog 4 Nov, 2017 @ 2:58pm 
I personally think that if it becomes transparent on a gradiant towards the end that'll look nice, not too sure on changing much else to be honest. I really think the *vocaloid* look fits Octavia well.
CrusaderF8 5 Nov, 2017 @ 1:03am 
Probably the best feedback I've seen so far. Personally, I think the "hair" has to retain the energy glow, whatever other changes are made. Maybe make said "hair" use a gradius ripple laser-esque effect? I dunno.

https://opengameart.org/sites/default/files/styles/medium/public/M484BulletCollection2PRE3.png

(Top left/center)

Probably too much, honestly.
Last edited by CrusaderF8; 5 Nov, 2017 @ 1:04am
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