Its demanding on the eyes.
Id say it would look better with more defined surfaces, clearer transitions and more prominent details. (this goes for all skins in this series)
Also, for the helmet, the neon lights and the metal pieces dont blend together well. (atleast for me, it could be these colours and that it would look alright with different palette.)
Other than that this is awesome. The visor itself looks great.
I needs changes, but this has potential, lots of it.So keep at it dude/dudette, lookin foward to you work!