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Advanced Chemistry [2.0.10] UNUPDATEABLE
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Spartan  [developer] 16 Jan, 2018 @ 1:40pm
Reports of grammatical errors
My native language is not English, I would appreciate the report of any type of grammatical failure.
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Kaedys 16 Jan, 2018 @ 5:24pm 
Tooltip for Concentrated Venom has two periods at the end of the first paragraph. Should either be a single period, or 3 (if an ellipsis was the goal). Probably the first one.

Tooltip for Advanced Narcotic doesn't have proper word usage. "Especially" should be "Specially". In this context, "specially designed" is far more common and reads better than "especially designed". Also, "designed for keep beasts asleep" should be "designed for keeping beasts asleep" or "designed to keep beasts asleep".

Tooltip for Dexamethasone Auto-Injector has a word error. "Sensibility" in the last sentence should be "sensitivity".
Spartan  [developer] 17 Jan, 2018 @ 2:56am 
Originally posted by Kaedys:
Tooltip for Concentrated Venom has two periods at the end of the first paragraph. Should either be a single period, or 3 (if an ellipsis was the goal). Probably the first one.

Tooltip for Advanced Narcotic doesn't have proper word usage. "Especially" should be "Specially". In this context, "specially designed" is far more common and reads better than "especially designed". Also, "designed for keep beasts asleep" should be "designed for keeping beasts asleep" or "designed to keep beasts asleep".

Tooltip for Dexamethasone Auto-Injector has a word error. "Sensibility" in the last sentence should be "sensitivity".

Fixed on the next version :steamhappy:
Thx @Kaedys !!
Shei_Hullud 22 Jan, 2018 @ 3:44am 
Oh boy, oh boy.

I'll go from top to bottom.

-Digestive Fluid
'acidic' instead of 'acid'
'preventing it'? preventing who? scrap the 'it'.
'The bigger and stronger' - no need for 'the', just 'Bigger and stronger' is enough.
(apart from the description not making any sense, because, Morphine is not a sedative not a good one at least, contrary to what everyone think it is, Propofol and all the -bital/bitol/pental/pam/lam families are, in fact, sedatives)

-Synth. Adrenaline
Again, the description hurts me as i am a medical personnel, but apart from that, its fine.

-Organic Alkaloid
Not 'synthesized by', but 'Synthesized from'.

These are in need of fixing right away, there some other grammar issues, but they are mild and can be understood in context to the description of the item.

Spartan  [developer] 22 Jan, 2018 @ 9:26am 
Originally posted by ShinSheela:
Oh boy, oh boy.

I'll go from top to bottom.

-Digestive Fluid
'acidic' instead of 'acid'
'preventing it'? preventing who? scrap the 'it'.
'The bigger and stronger' - no need for 'the', just 'Bigger and stronger' is enough.
(apart from the description not making any sense, because, Morphine is not a sedative not a good one at least, contrary to what everyone think it is, Propofol and all the -bital/bitol/pental/pam/lam families are, in fact, sedatives)

-Synth. Adrenaline
Again, the description hurts me as i am a medical personnel, but apart from that, its fine.

-Organic Alkaloid
Not 'synthesized by', but 'Synthesized from'.

These are in need of fixing right away, there some other grammar issues, but they are mild and can be understood in context to the description of the item.

Thx i will try to fix on the next update.


By the way, keep in mind that I am not a scientist or chemist and I try to adapt the descriptions to the game, not to be a wiki.

There is no need to be rude
Originally posted by Spartan:
My native language is not English, I would appreciate the report of any type of grammatical failure.
Last edited by Spartan; 22 Jan, 2018 @ 9:27am
The Fallen 22 Jan, 2018 @ 10:08am 
Not a grammer error, but you are spelling Titanoboa as Titanboa.
Shei_Hullud 22 Jan, 2018 @ 12:11pm 
Excuse me if you precieved my comment as rude, it wasnt my intention, just a side note :)
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