http://fav.me/dbzvxux

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1324371385

Here my dude just take a look at this magnificent peice of art.

So...here's mine artwork:
http://www60.zippyshare.com/v/yMjyOozM/file.html
Tell me what you think about it. You don't need to be nice, I'd like to know what I did wrong and what I can change to make this better.

I haven't upload this artwork to Steam. I wonder how can I correct this to look better.

Originally posted by Stain Wolf:

http://fav.me/dbzvxux

Looks pretty good! Though this is with the other Monika model! I like it, keep at it!

Originally posted by Natsukeh:

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1324371385

Here my dude just take a look at this magnificent peice of art.

Ahh! Dang, look at Natsuki! Her legs look long xD Let's call her Legsuki.

Very well made, keep up the great work! :D

Originally posted by Atis:

So...here's mine artwork:
http://www60.zippyshare.com/v/yMjyOozM/file.html
Tell me what you think about it. You don't need to be nice, I'd like to know what I did wrong and what I can change to make this better.
:demoticon:

I like the idea here, though I did see your review on the models. And that is very helpful to hear, now. For your render, I think there are some things to be worked on. I like it, but here's what you can do to make it better than what it already is.

When you pose the models, I think the non-jiggle bone one work better with the skirts. You should position them with the skirt bones, to make them flow better. Like when Monika is sitting down, another thing you should focus on is the lighting. A little bit brighter, and volumemetircs would make it look more dynamic. Other than that, I can't really say much! It's a good idea, there will be an update soon that should have better textures. So they won't look so pale, but thank you for using the models! Render quality is always good, with depth of field and whatnot.

Have a great day, keep on practicing!

Originally posted by Jigglyking20:

Originally posted by Atis:

So...here's mine artwork:
http://www60.zippyshare.com/v/yMjyOozM/file.html
Tell me what you think about it. You don't need to be nice, I'd like to know what I did wrong and what I can change to make this better.

I like the idea here, though I did see your review on the models. And that is very helpful to hear, now. For your render, I think there are some things to be worked on. I like it, but here's what you can do to make it better than what it already is.

When you pose the models, I think the non-jiggle bone one work better with the skirts. You should position them with the skirt bones, to make them flow better. Like when Monika is sitting down, another thing you should focus on is the lighting. A little bit brighter, and volumemetircs would make it look more dynamic. Other than that, I can't really say much! It's a good idea, there will be an update soon that should have better textures. So they won't look so pale, but thank you for using the models! Render quality is always good, with depth of field and whatnot.

Have a great day, keep on practicing!

Thank you! I was thinking of uploading this on profile. Good to me and thanks to you, now I know what should I correct before doing this. I aprreciate your opinion. :)

Originally posted by Atis:

Originally posted by Jigglyking20:

I like the idea here, though I did see your review on the models. And that is very helpful to hear, now. For your render, I think there are some things to be worked on. I like it, but here's what you can do to make it better than what it already is.

When you pose the models, I think the non-jiggle bone one work better with the skirts. You should position them with the skirt bones, to make them flow better. Like when Monika is sitting down, another thing you should focus on is the lighting. A little bit brighter, and volumemetircs would make it look more dynamic. Other than that, I can't really say much! It's a good idea, there will be an update soon that should have better textures. So they won't look so pale, but thank you for using the models! Render quality is always good, with depth of field and whatnot.

Have a great day, keep on practicing!

Thank you! I was thinking of uploading this on profile. Good to me and thanks to you, now I know what should I correct before doing this. I aprreciate your opinion. :)

Of course! You can always ask for feedback! I love helping other, keep it up!

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1326030292

Originally posted by Ndy:

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1326030292

Nice job my dude :D

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1329957441

Originally posted by junjun:

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1329957441

Looking good! :D

Just a simple test (i know that its pretty bad)
https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1331431062&fileuploadsuccess=1

Originally posted by General Hux:

Just a simple test (i know that its pretty bad)
https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1331431062&fileuploadsuccess=1

Looking amazing! <3

I made two versions, one of Sayori, and one of Natsuki for my friend:

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1334856310
https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1334858419