I am here to comment on a couple concerns that may arise in discussions you may have with DE during assessment of this piece.

One major concern to address right up would be to ensure that coloration doesnt act wierd when using odd or dark colors like what happens with Arcturus wings when you use specific shades that are dark the colors dont reflect the pallette choice correctly.

Another concern is regarding visibility will these wings fold down like the wings currently ingame when not jumping and if so how far down?

Aside from these issues I would like to make a request if possible to lengthen the feather sections if possible within your design for the section at the base of each wing (closest to the body) while folloing the line those feathers take away from the body?

A stunning piece and I pray that you keep tweaking this and if it isnt accepted first time do NOT give up I LOVE these wings and want to buy them asap!