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And again this helm doesn't intimade/scare me. And valkyr is feline, femine and RAW.
I think the energy lights on the helmet are awkwardly placed. It alludes to a large head, it gives that impression because it looks like eyes placed very far apart --like a beetle. I think these should be placed closer together or removed entirely. It might look good from the side, but not the front.
I would also consider tapering the tail in the back of the helmet. It currently just looks like one, thick appendage coming out of her head and is not too tail-like. Either taper it, or attach an object at the end sort of like the collar-tag (or bell, not sure what it is), or a shape similar to the helmet's crown. Maybe even something wispy, to imitate a tail-tuft like a lion's tail.
Some other advice might be to make the energy lights form a pattern. I have some ideas for this, if you are up for changing the energy lights.
Good work overall. Let me know if you ever want to collaborate. I love to design/make concepts.
This very VEEEEERY minor issue aside I applaud you for yet another fantastic piece.
To spank me daddy, thank you as I keep saying this across multiple threads such as the incoming Nyx workshop item that looks like a Valkyrie. Being critical is one thing but providing reasonable and thought out critiques at the same time as suggesting or asking questions is lost on most of the trolls in this workshop sadly.
I have seen Hitsu cop some insane flak for no reason as well as others including the Vodyanoi Chroma creator for so many insanely irrelevant reasons its good to see people with the skills giving clear clean advice and gives me hope.