While I really like the idea of this (i main ianros so im biast) first of all there should be some better pictures of the helement its hard to tell what the face looks like from what im given to view on steam.

Secondly the pouch cloth pocket things on the legs.. personally i dislike them but i see where you are going on them if its an allowed tool or mesh maybe see about making them like umbras cloth? if thats even possible.

other than some more defining on the chest however i'd still get it as is myself.