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orokin writing would be cool, but there's another cosmetic from tennogen with the hoop shape and focus tree symbols already. I would say the design in the circles should be redone so that the top one doesn't make it assymetrical, beyond that it looks pretty cool

I would avoid focus symbols. Focus symbols would make it look far too much like an existing syandana.

By changing the Tomoe symbols to Focus symbols you'd be, well, changing the entire thing imo.
Although I do agree on the part for a partial re texture?

please no focus schools. maybe orokin writing, but i dont like the focus schools, plus there's always a syandana with those that looks similar (not identical, but goes for a similar direction)

Great Great Great, the name Tomoe like the fist and most famous Female Samurai of history Tomoe Gozen and i saw also the logo owned by Tomoe Gozen on it the 3 point star good i want it!!!!!!

Definitely not the focus schools. This seems to be heavily inspired by the raijin(god of thunder) and a connection to volt. Changing it to the focus schools would undermine its intentions I believe. Orokin writing would be neat, but the structure of the writing is heavily arabic-esque which clashes with the continuity of the tomoe swirl on the taiko.

Ok, this post is exactly what I was about to say. Man, can you stop reading my mind EVEN BEFORE IT IS MY MIND?! x)

If there wasn't a syandana before with focus school symbols i'd agree. I like the symmetry of using one symbol either way. I agree with the re texture but I don't agree with the orokin writing. That sounds more like a preference than an improvement since it still would be the same cursive design