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Corpra Mag
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SwitchingOffNow 25 Aug, 2019 @ 3:51pm
This is really amazing, i think that the details make it work really well.
I only have one suggestion, the only thing that i really don't like is the text running on her visor. Its a small thing but I feel like its a bit obnoxious, the ones on the back of the helmet are cool but the front seems a bit overkill.

To me personally it doesn't feel like something the corpus would do. Putting essentially advertising their language onto the front visor of a helmet. It just seems a bit cliche.

My suggestion would be

1) to either remove it and come up with a different energy pattern for the front visor only

OR

2) Keep the text but make it seem like its on the inside of the helmet, almost like a heads up display similar to something from iron man. This would mean making the colours a little more subtle to make it seem like its on the inside of the helmet but also flipping the text so its like its being read from the inside. As if whoever is inside is keeping up with the corpus economy or something.

Sorry if this seemed like i was shouting. I really love your work and have been waiting on this since you posted a comment about Mag being the next Copra frame on your Mesa Copra Reddit post. <3 just wanted to give my thoughts.
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VIII🎖 25 Aug, 2019 @ 8:19pm 
I think that second detail you are mentioning could be achieved by using two energy colors, one of them being the dark one, and i mean in game, i feel the design is pretty good! we just got to hope it gets approved and start experimenting on it
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TROUBLE 26 Aug, 2019 @ 8:08am 
I really like it and I think that advertising on the front visor of a helmet is exactly something the corpus would do. Has anyone translated it yet?
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Psycho Cadence 26 Aug, 2019 @ 10:38am 
I rather like the text scrolling. It brings something else other than random swirl pattern 'x' to the table. As for it being obnoxious, most of Corpus things look that way. :P
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FrellingHazmot  [developer] 27 Aug, 2019 @ 12:43pm 
Yeah the front of the visor was a concern for me too. I was going to cover it up with metal but I felt that it would have been too similar to Nova and Mag is iconic for having a lot of energy effects on the front of her helmet so that's why I chose to do it this way. I can see this being an issue though if it doesn't get into the game right away. This would probably be DE's main feedback about it. If it does get in I can still use this to explore it with other warframes. Thanks for the suggestions!
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FrellingHazmot  [developer] 27 Aug, 2019 @ 12:44pm 
Originally posted by Trouble:
I really like it and I think that advertising on the front visor of a helmet is exactly something the corpus would do. Has anyone translated it yet?

;)
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FeedTheNachoMan 6 Sep, 2019 @ 10:26am 
I mean text scrolling down the visor worked for Trinity Prime, I'm sure it works for Mag Corpra too
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glue 16 Nov, 2019 @ 5:04pm 
I think this skin is fantastic
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Nighe 17 Nov, 2019 @ 9:47am 
I came here to see if Mag was gonna get a Corpra skin made. I am happy. I hope this makes it in. Fantastic work.
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Axull 17 Feb, 2020 @ 4:09pm 
Mag fits for Corpra like no other, and I love how you incorporated detail onto the body itself in order to impart the trademark Corpus look to it - choke-collar which gives it a Crewman vibe, namely. The visor text seems to be indirectly fitting with Glassmaker logo - with corpus text dangling down from it - which oddly makes the idea even more relevant than it already is. Great job!
Last edited by Axull; 17 Feb, 2020 @ 4:09pm
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Rorschach Test 15 May, 2020 @ 9:54am 
I personally found the letters corpus on the helmet the most beautiful thing about your skin, if possible keep it. The theme will be complete like this. (my english is improving, sorry)
Last edited by Rorschach Test; 15 May, 2020 @ 9:58am
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