Hello friends,
These are my suggestions to improve the English translation for this mod.
I hope this is helpful to you ♥

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Item Name: Spirit tail ring
Suggestion: Spirit Tail Circlet
Reason:
> "Tail ring" is English slang for anus
> Fix capital letters for proper noun

Item Name: Potted Yellow Mushroom
Suggestion: Yellow Mushrooms
Reason:
> "Potted" only applies to plants inside a pot or jar.
> Fix plural noun

Item Name: Spirit chandelier
Suggestion: Spirit Chandelier
Reason:
> Fix capital letters for proper noun

Item Name: Bread basket
Suggestion: Bread Basket
Reason:
> Fix capital letters for proper noun

Item Description: Bread basket
Suggestion: A basket of delicious, fragrant bread.
Reason:
> Better flow

Item Name: JumpFlower Chair
Suggestion: Jumpflower Chair
Reason:
> Fix improper capital letter

Item Description: JumpFlower Chair
Suggestion: A soft chair made from jumpflowers.
Reason:
> Better flow

Item Name: Large spirittree Wall Banner
Suggestion: Large Spirit Tree Wall Banner
Reason:
> Fix capital letters for proper nouns

Item Description: Large spirittree Wall Banner
Suggestion: A hanging banner from a Spirit Academy.
Reason:
> Better flow

Item Description: Niwen Spirit Tree Table
Suggestion: A table designed in the shape of Niwen's Spirit Tree.
Reason:
> Better flow
> Fix capital letters for proper nouns

Item Name: Small spirittree Wall Banner
Suggestion: Small Spirit Tree Wall Banner
Reason:
> Fix capital letters for proper nouns

Item Description: Small spirittree Wall Banner
Suggestion: A hanging banner from a Spirit Academy.
Reason:
> Better flow

Item Description: Spirit Bookshelf
Suggestion: Full of books from the Spirit Tree.
Reason:
> Better flow
> "hometown of spirit" sounds very strange in English

Item Name: Spirit Fruit Buffy
Suggestion: Spirit Fruit Mixer
Reason:
> There is no drink named 'Buffy' in English

Item Description: Spirit Fruit Buffy
Suggestion: Freshly squeezed Spirit Fruit. Delicious!
Reason:
> Better flow

Item Description: Spirit Fruit Juice
Suggestion: A sweet, relaxing extract that refreshes the body.
Reason:
> Better flow

Item Description: Spirit Fruit Cake
Suggestion: Fluffy cake covered with cream made from fresh Spirit Fruit.
Reason:
> Fix pluralization
> Fix capital letters for proper nouns

Item Description: Spirit Hammock
Suggestion: A comfy nest bed.
Reason:
> "wooden bed" is to sleep on wood.

Item Description: Spirit Long Table
Suggestion: A longer table decorated with a banner.
Reason:
> "suitable for placing things" sounds very weird in English

Item Name: spiritbirthflag
Suggestion: Spirit Birth Flag
Reason:
> Fix capital letters on proper nouns

Item Description: spiritbirthflag
Suggestion: A banner depicting the origins of the Spirit Tree.
Reason:
> Better flow
> "beginning of the spirit" sounds very weird in English

Item Description: Ornate Spirit Wood
Suggestion: Polished wood from a Spirit Tree.
Reason:
> "spiritual carpenter" sounds very weird in English (might be confused with Jesus)

Item Description: Spirit Leaf Pile
Suggestion: Softly glowing leaves from a Spirit Tree.
Reason:
> "spiritual leaves" sounds very weird in English

Item Description: Spirit Light Platform
Suggestion: A platform made from light.
Reason:
> Better flow

Item Description: Spirit Log
Suggestion: Glowing logs from a Spirit Tree.
Reason:
> Better flow
> "spiritual hometown" sounds very weird in English

Item Description: Spirit Plant Platform
Suggestion: Glowing lichens and mosses sprout from this overgrown platform.
Reason:
> English does not allow sentence to begin with 'because'
> Better flow

Item Description: Spirit Wood Panelling
Suggestion: Wooden boards cut from Spirit Logs.
Reason:
> "inlaid with" sounds weird in this context

Item Description: Spirit Novice Bow
Suggestion: A lightweight bow intended for novice hunters.
Reason:
> "suitable for" sounds weird here

Item Description: Spirit Cyan Wind
Suggestion: Spirits describe the arrows fired from this bow as blue gusts of wind.
Reason:
> Better flow

Item Description: Spirit Tree Marksman
Suggestion: Expert hunters are trained to fire multiple arrows at once from this sturdy bow.
Reason:
> Less silly :P

Item Name: sein fragment
Suggestion: Sein Fragment
Reason:
> Fix capital letters for proper nouns

Item Description: sein fragment
Suggestion: The light of a guiding spirit. Produces breathable air.
Reason:
> Better flow
> Describe use of item

Item Description: Sein Light
Suggestion: The blessing of a guiding spirit. Protects from radiation.
Reason:
> Better flow
> Describe use of item

Item Description: Seir Fragment
Suggestion: The light of a protective spirit. Protects from intense cold.
Reason:
> Better flow
> Describe use of item

Item Description: Seir Light
Suggestion: The blessing of a protective spirit. Protects from overwhelming heat.
Reason:
> Better flow
> Describe use of item