this is a cool idea but there's some things need adjusting. first the UI is a bit too big. 2 I would expect a Otamatone too be a bit lighter. 3 and I feel the move set dosent feel inspired the only UP B feels like it would only work with this character you feels life you could replace the sprites with a keybored and the move set would still make sense. 4 mabye make the meter fill up with more then just the one move. but hey its a interesting concept for a character you did a good job!

Dald22 の投稿を引用：

this is a cool idea but there's some things need adjusting. first the UI is a bit too big. 2 I would expect a Otamatone too be a bit lighter. 3 and I feel the move set dosent feel inspired the only UP B feels like it would only work with this character you feels life you could replace the sprites with a keybored and the move set would still make sense. 4 mabye make the meter fill up with more then just the one move. but hey its a interesting concept for a character you did a good job!

1. Ok I will shorten the size of the UI. 2. The otamatone is kinda heavy because the actual structure of an otamatone is weird, it's light to throw and stuff but whatever it's made out of makes it so when you kinda move it it's not smooth so I kinda wanted to replicate it. You wouldnt get unless you had an actual otamatone.3. An otamatone is so simple that its hard to change things up, Mr. Knocky helps but it's still simple. If you want to leave moveset suggestions go ahead, I am open to anything. 4. The meter can fill up with more than one move. Specifically, FTILT, BAIR, DSTRONG, and DSPECIAL. If it cant then thats a bug

cool ok also I made a better render for the victory sceen and character select and stuff https://imgur.com/a/aFxkmDY

Dald22 の投稿を引用：

cool ok also I made a better render for the victory sceen and character select and stuff https://imgur.com/a/aFxkmDY

I dont care if this is a joke or not, im including this as an official render. Beautiful 10/10

thank you!

np

i think the meter thing is neat but there are so many bars to charge up and the reward is not even that great since for Ftilt and Dstrong you can't really make use of the stun since the stun ends before your end lag does, and they really don't deal that much more damage. what i am thinking instead is the bar is in segments like Vaccinator in TF2, is the normal ver of the move until you fill up a segment (i think like 3 or 5 bars per segment) but the stun lasts longer the more segments you have filled up, allowing you to follow up on the stun.

BeeFuccer の投稿を引用：

i think the meter thing is neat but there are so many bars to charge up and the reward is not even that great since for Ftilt and Dstrong you can't really make use of the stun since the stun ends before your end lag does, and they really don't deal that much more damage. what i am thinking instead is the bar is in segments like Vaccinator in TF2, is the normal ver of the move until you fill up a segment (i think like 3 or 5 bars per segment) but the stun lasts longer the more segments you have filled up, allowing you to follow up on the stun.

that's a cool concept, I will try to do that but im not sure if you can make the plasma stun longer tho

DJPENGUIN の投稿を引用：

If you could take fighter suggestions, maybe you could put Jitters into Rivals of Aether. (Kinda like Villager from Smash Bros but the slingshot move is replaced with a soccer ball that could have a chance to apply burn damage to a opponent and the Balloon Fighter move is replaced with just one balloon; you can recover quickly as long it doesn't gets popped. His alts could be based on the other colors of the Soccer Uniform in Animal Crossing: New Horizons.) https://nookipedia.com/wiki/Jitters And take this reference sheet, might save you in a itch. https://www.deviantart.com/jacoblovesyoshi/art/Here-s-a-Jitters-Reference-Sheet-861723238

Im not familiar with jitters and i havent played animal crossing, so I would feel like I wouldnt do him justice. If you are so passionate, then you can just do it yourself

could you touch up nair's animation, right now the animation doesn't really convey how big the hitbox is, maybe have it so theres a smear the covers almost all of the otamatone's body