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"Basilisco" (!!!OBSOLETE!!!)
i need lore
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Dami_V_Fox 7 Jul, 2021 @ 2:43pm 
the year is 2023 and there is an alien invasion and this is their most common attack ship :)
The year is 2027 and technology has tooken over earth and that is there best weapon
4d9r 13 Jul, 2021 @ 12:14am 
The year is 99999 and the communist nazi zombie cyborg supersoldiers have taken over the planet known as earth 2 and this is their most powerful one.
Eggy 15 Jul, 2021 @ 12:56pm 
the year is 6969. two words. Space Aids
No.Name.Bagu 16 Jul, 2021 @ 8:33am 
spokey alein creture
Pootis bird1 26 Jul, 2021 @ 5:48pm 
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Year is 2039, set in an alternative half-life universe where the combine has wiped out 99.9981% of humans on earth. The combine revoked Earth's surrender and declared the extermination/enslaving of every self-aware creature. The Combine captured and reconstructed Gordon Freeman into a deadly Combat Stalker in 2025, killed Alyx & Eli Vance in the bombing attack of Chicago during 2028, and killed Barney Calhoun in an underground bunker with many other civilians in 2035. The Combine learnt to make & use teleporters after drugging and killing Dr.Isaac Kleiner in 2036. The Combine were exterminating civilians almost every day! Its been clear that the Combine wont stop until Earth belonged to them. You are luckily one of the 229,100 remaining humans left on Earth. You were sailing your way across the Pacific Ocean in hopes of finding people, then you spot a small abandoned village just a quarter a mile away and decide to camp out for the night. 3 hours later you wake up to the sounds of danger and hide behind one of the houses. You're faced by a giant flying Combine creature you've never seen before! You may have been tracked by your old radio you had in the boat, and your faced to make 2 decisions: Hide or Fight

This went from a joke to an actual damn story, let me know if you liked it :D
Last edited by Pootis bird1; 27 Jul, 2021 @ 8:27am
pootis bird1 good story for hl2 mod
FrostByte-64 27 Jul, 2021 @ 7:12am 
Originally posted by Pootis bird1:
Year is 2039, set in an alternative half-life universe where the combine has wiped out 98% of humans on earth. The combine revoked Earth's surrender and declared the extermination/enslaving of every self-aware creature. The Combine captured and reconstructed Gordon Freeman into a deadly Combat Stalker in 2025, killed Alyx & Eli Vance in the bombing attack of Chicago during 2028, and killed Barney Calhoun in an underground bunker with many other civilians in 2035. The Combine learnt to make & use teleporters after drugging and killing Dr.Isaac Kleiner in 2036. The Combine were exterminating civilians almost every day! Its been clear that the Combine wont stop until Earth belonged to them. You are luckily one of the 229,100 remaining humans left on Earth. You were sailing your way across the Pacific Ocean in hopes of finding people, then you spot a small abandoned village just a quarter a mile away and decide to camp out for the night. 3 hours later you wake up to the sounds of danger and hide behind one of the houses. You're faced by a giant flying Combine creature you've never seen before! You may have been tracked by your old radio you had in the boat, and your faced to make 2 decisions: Hide or Fight

This went from a joke to an actual damn story, let me know if you liked it :D
WTH THATS A GOOD LORE STORY
Pootis bird1 27 Jul, 2021 @ 8:04am 
lol thanks :D I never gotten compliments like this on steam

The sounds this creature makes and how its armed with weapons really reminded me of the Combine from the half-life universe, which is why I choose'd half life. If you go ingame and load this map, you can't tell me that THAT creature doesn't look like something the combine would make. It almost fits in perfectly with my lore.
Last edited by Pootis bird1; 27 Jul, 2021 @ 8:10am
Nick the Braixen 29 Jul, 2021 @ 10:36pm 
2077.....Something made you a criminal....
Creeper_Man 24 Sep, 2021 @ 11:45am 
2020: amogus makes a flying snake and kills 69.69% of all fortnite players and you are a fortnite player
there is no year date count thing anymore, you've retreated from them all the way to here and they have come to terminate you in the destroyed city
cars4456 10 Oct, 2021 @ 1:15pm 
it's the year 2777 and humans started colonizing an exoplanet named Kano 2077. and they couldn't risk losing anybody as they're cautious, so they made humanoid drones named exo-drones to explore exo planets to make sure they're colonization safe. and you're one of the drones and as you and your drone comrades explore Kano 2077, you come across ruins as to what was once a very advanced civilization what caused the civilization's destruction? you decide to ignore it for now, and then you and your comrades came across a large metal door and you found a way to open the door by programming the door terminal that works for some reason, and then you and your comrades uncovered a large abandoned ruins of what used to be a factory you enter the factory and as your group enters the door shuts. and you suddenly get a very bad feeling from this place and you come across a terminal that somehow still but barely works and with the built in universal translator read what is the terminal saying, and you've come across a strange and interesting file named "Project Basilisco" and when you click on it it shows a presentation with all sorts of info and details and diagrams and systems and weapons on the strange machine and the presentation tells you "its a war machine in development" and after you got finished with the terminal learning all sorts of info, you've come across a control console for a strange capsule labeled "Basilisco container" and you see a switch which has a label under it and it says "release Basilisco" and you hit the switch and you and your comrades watch as the strange capsule opens and reveals a strange machine. and the machine wakes up and it shines a bright blue light on you and your comrades, and it looks like the weird machine is scanning your team and then you get a feeling of worry and read as the light goes from bright blue to bright red and the machine is making you feel like you and your comrades are not welcome, and you decide to run away from the spot of the machine and as you get far away enough you hear screaming from your comrades and loud machine sounds and then hear it's weapons firing and then the screaming stops, and you feel like running is the best choice and you think the machine killed your comrades and then you see it's bright red light turns back into bright blue and you see the machine fly away from its original position you think it entered search mode. its hunting you and on your way to the entrance you come across weapons and tools you decide to pick all of them up, and as you get to the entrance and open the door the machine heard the door open and it saw you and it charged at you. and you ran outside and as you do you barely managed to avoid the machine as it broke through the entrance destroying it and you ran to a ruins of what used to be a village that looks like another but much less advanced civilization that could be in the medieval tech stage was here and probably got wiped out by the much more advanced civilization and surprisingly a decent amount of buildings can be used to hide in and you decide to hide in one of the buildings, and the machine followed you to the village but luckily it lost you and reentered search mode. and you're left with a choice, hide from the machine or fight the machine?
i made this to challenge Pootis Bird1's lore post
Last edited by cars4456; 10 Oct, 2021 @ 2:33pm
cars4456 10 Oct, 2021 @ 1:29pm 
Originally posted by Pootis bird1:
lol thanks :D I never gotten compliments like this on steam

The sounds this creature makes and how its armed with weapons really reminded me of the Combine from the half-life universe, which is why I choose'd half life. If you go ingame and load this map, you can't tell me that THAT creature doesn't look like something the combine would make. It almost fits in perfectly with my lore.
check my lore post on steam and let me know if u liked it :steamthumbsup::steamhappy::steamthumbsup:
Pootis bird1 10 Oct, 2021 @ 5:33pm 
@cars4456 ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥!! This is well done!

Recommendations: Fix all punctuation errors throughout your story
Correct all capitalization errors
There are many and's in your story, replace some of them with ","
Your supposed to write sentences, not paragraphs

Other than that, i'm impressed! Good work :D

Remember: A good writer really takes pride in their work, and will keep writing until their satisfaction is meet. If something feels wrong, they will keep rechecking and rewriting until their sense of error vanishes. I hope you learnt something! :steamthumbsup:
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