Ошибок орфографии много. Прогони текст через ворд. Бросилось в глаза утро дня когда алиса позвала ГГ. "Я резко развернулся на 360 градусов" Напомню что 360 градусов, это сделать круг вокруг себя))) а не повернуться назад на 180 градусов.

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While loading <'Image' u'mods/stringsoftriumph/new_bg/sot_muzclub_night.jpg'>:
File "../../workshop/content/331470/2781571592/mods/stringsoftriumph/sot_day_5.rpy", line 2948, in script
scene bg sot_muzclub_night with dissolve
IOError: Couldn't find file 'mods/stringsoftriumph/new_bg/sot_muzclub_night.jpg'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "../../workshop/content/331470/2781571592/mods/stringsoftriumph/sot_day_5.rpy", line 2948, in script
scene bg sot_muzclub_night with dissolve
File "renpy/ast.py", line 1443, in execute
renpy.exports.with_statement(trans, paired)
File "renpy/exports.py", line 1684, in with_statement
return renpy.game.interface.do_with(trans, paired, clear=clear)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2762, in do_with
clear=clear)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3325, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3839, in interact_core
self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2565, in draw_screen
renpy.config.screen_height,
File "render.pyx", line 492, in renpy.display.render.render_screen
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/transition.py", line 368, in render
top = render(self.new_widget, width, height, st, at)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/transform.py", line 733, in render
return transform_render(self, width, height, st, at)
File "accelerator.pyx", line 187, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/image.py", line 501, in render
return wrap_render(self.target, width, height, st, at)
File "renpy/display/image.py", line 307, in wrap_render
rend = render(child, w, h, st, at)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/im.py", line 625, in render
return cache.get(self, render=True)
File "renpy/display/im.py", line 287, in get
surf = image.load()
File "renpy/display/im.py", line 706, in load
raise e
IOError: Couldn't find file 'mods/stringsoftriumph/new_bg/sot_muzclub_night.jpg'.

Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266
Лето 87-го 0.69
Sat Apr 2 18:24:17 2022

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I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While loading <'Image' u'mods/stringsoftriumph/new_cg/sot_d5_love.jpg'>:
File "../../workshop/content/331470/2781571592/mods/stringsoftriumph/sot_day_5.rpy", line 3037, in script
show cg sot_d5_love with dissolve:
IOError: Couldn't find file 'mods/stringsoftriumph/new_cg/sot_d5_love.jpg'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "../../workshop/content/331470/2781571592/mods/stringsoftriumph/sot_day_5.rpy", line 3037, in script
show cg sot_d5_love with dissolve:
File "renpy/ast.py", line 1443, in execute
renpy.exports.with_statement(trans, paired)
File "renpy/exports.py", line 1684, in with_statement
return renpy.game.interface.do_with(trans, paired, clear=clear)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2762, in do_with
clear=clear)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3325, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3839, in interact_core
self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2565, in draw_screen
renpy.config.screen_height,
File "render.pyx", line 492, in renpy.display.render.render_screen
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/transition.py", line 368, in render
top = render(self.new_widget, width, height, st, at)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/transform.py", line 733, in render
return transform_render(self, width, height, st, at)
File "accelerator.pyx", line 187, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/image.py", line 501, in render
return wrap_render(self.target, width, height, st, at)
File "renpy/display/image.py", line 307, in wrap_render
rend = render(child, w, h, st, at)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/im.py", line 625, in render
return cache.get(self, render=True)
File "renpy/display/im.py", line 287, in get
surf = image.load()
File "renpy/display/im.py", line 706, in load
raise e
IOError: Couldn't find file 'mods/stringsoftriumph/new_cg/sot_d5_love.jpg'.

Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266
Лето 87-го 0.69
Sat Apr 2 18:29:43 2022

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While loading <'MatrixColor' <'Composite' (1125, 1080) (0, 0) u'mods/stringsoftriumph/sprites/close/dv/dv_1_body.png' (0, 0) u'mods/stringsoftriumph/sprites/close/dv/dv_1_pioneer2.png' (0, 0) u'mods/stringsoftriumph/sprites/close/dv/dv_1_think.png'> (0.63, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0.78, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0.82, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 1, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 1)>:
File "../../workshop/content/331470/2781571592/mods/stringsoftriumph/sot_day_5.rpy", line 3085, in script
show dv think pioneer2 close with dissolve_fast
IOError: Couldn't find file 'mods/stringsoftriumph/sprites/close/dv/dv_1_body.png'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "../../workshop/content/331470/2781571592/mods/stringsoftriumph/sot_day_5.rpy", line 3085, in script
show dv think pioneer2 close with dissolve_fast
File "renpy/ast.py", line 1443, in execute
renpy.exports.with_statement(trans, paired)
File "renpy/exports.py", line 1684, in with_statement
return renpy.game.interface.do_with(trans, paired, clear=clear)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2762, in do_with
clear=clear)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3325, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3839, in interact_core
self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2565, in draw_screen
renpy.config.screen_height,
File "render.pyx", line 492, in renpy.display.render.render_screen
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/transition.py", line 368, in render
top = render(self.new_widget, width, height, st, at)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/transform.py", line 733, in render
return transform_render(self, width, height, st, at)
File "accelerator.pyx", line 187, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/image.py", line 501, in render
return wrap_render(self.target, width, height, st, at)
File "renpy/display/image.py", line 307, in wrap_render
rend = render(child, w, h, st, at)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 367, in render
surf = render(self.child, width, height, st, at)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1456, in render
cr = renpy.display.render.render(self.child, w, h, st, at)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/im.py", line 625, in render
return cache.get(self, render=True)
File "renpy/display/im.py", line 287, in get
surf = image.load()
File "renpy/display/im.py", line 1338, in load
surf = cache.get(self.image)
File "renpy/display/im.py", line 287, in get
surf = image.load()
File "renpy/display/im.py", line 832, in load
rv.blit(cache.get(im), pos)
File "renpy/display/im.py", line 287, in get
surf = image.load()
File "renpy/display/im.py", line 706, in load
raise e
IOError: Couldn't find file 'mods/stringsoftriumph/sprites/close/dv/dv_1_body.png'.

Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266
Лето 87-го 0.69
Sat Apr 2 18:32:26 2022

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While loading <'Image' u'mods/stringsoftriumph/new_bg/sot_int_house_of_dv_night2.jpg'>:
File "../../workshop/content/331470/2781571592/mods/stringsoftriumph/sot_day_5.rpy", line 3128, in script
show bg sot_int_house_of_dv_night2 with fade
IOError: Couldn't find file 'mods/stringsoftriumph/new_bg/sot_int_house_of_dv_night2.jpg'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "../../workshop/content/331470/2781571592/mods/stringsoftriumph/sot_day_5.rpy", line 3128, in script
show bg sot_int_house_of_dv_night2 with fade
File "renpy/ast.py", line 1443, in execute
renpy.exports.with_statement(trans, paired)
File "renpy/exports.py", line 1684, in with_statement
return renpy.game.interface.do_with(trans, paired, clear=clear)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2762, in do_with
clear=clear)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3325, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3839, in interact_core
self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2565, in draw_screen
renpy.config.screen_height,
File "render.pyx", line 492, in renpy.display.render.render_screen
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/transition.py", line 181, in render
renpy.display.render.render(self.transitions[-1], width, height, 0, 0)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/transition.py", line 368, in render
top = render(self.new_widget, width, height, st, at)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/transform.py", line 733, in render
return transform_render(self, width, height, st, at)
File "accelerator.pyx", line 187, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/image.py", line 501, in render
return wrap_render(self.target, width, height, st, at)
File "renpy/display/image.py", line 307, in wrap_render
rend = render(child, w, h, st, at)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/im.py", line 625, in render
return cache.get(self, render=True)
File "renpy/display/im.py", line 287, in get
surf = image.load()
File "renpy/display/im.py", line 706, in load
raise e
IOError: Couldn't find file 'mods/stringsoftriumph/new_bg/sot_int_house_of_dv_night2.jpg'.

Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266
Лето 87-го 0.69
Sat Apr 2 18:34:16 2022

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While loading <'Image' u'mods/stringsoftriumph/new_bg/sot_day_6.jpg'>:
File "../../workshop/content/331470/2781571592/mods/stringsoftriumph/sot_day_6.rpy", line 11, in script
scene sot_day_6 with dissolve
IOError: Couldn't find file 'mods/stringsoftriumph/new_bg/sot_day_6.jpg'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "../../workshop/content/331470/2781571592/mods/stringsoftriumph/sot_day_6.rpy", line 11, in script
scene sot_day_6 with dissolve
File "renpy/ast.py", line 1443, in execute
renpy.exports.with_statement(trans, paired)
File "renpy/exports.py", line 1684, in with_statement
return renpy.game.interface.do_with(trans, paired, clear=clear)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2762, in do_with
clear=clear)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3325, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3839, in interact_core
self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2565, in draw_screen
renpy.config.screen_height,
File "render.pyx", line 492, in renpy.display.render.render_screen
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/transition.py", line 368, in render
top = render(self.new_widget, width, height, st, at)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/transform.py", line 733, in render
return transform_render(self, width, height, st, at)
File "accelerator.pyx", line 187, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/image.py", line 501, in render
return wrap_render(self.target, width, height, st, at)
File "renpy/display/image.py", line 307, in wrap_render
rend = render(child, w, h, st, at)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/im.py", line 625, in render
return cache.get(self, render=True)
File "renpy/display/im.py", line 287, in get
surf = image.load()
File "renpy/display/im.py", line 706, in load
raise e
IOError: Couldn't find file 'mods/stringsoftriumph/new_bg/sot_day_6.jpg'.

Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266
Лето 87-го 0.69
Sat Apr 2 18:36:18 2022

Логические не состыковки в разговоре ГГ и алисы после взрыва "по душам"

Originally posted by 🔰Алисаман🔰:

Логические не состыковки в разговоре ГГ и алисы после взрыва "по душам"

Конкретнее, пожалуйста. Какой именно момент разговора?

Ну в глаза бросилось то что "этой зимой(или в январе? вообщем если щас лето то пол года назад) папа алисы ушел к маме лены". Однако в разговоре читам "Да ладно это было много лет назад".

Originally posted by 🔰Алисаман🔰:

Ну в глаза бросилось то что "этой зимой(или в январе? вообщем если щас лето то пол года назад) папа алисы ушел к маме лены". Однако в разговоре читам "Да ладно это было много лет назад".

Хм, не замечал. Перепроверю.

Это еще не все. У ГГ тоже странности в личной жизни. То "родителям я не нужен", то "отец тоже от нас с мамой ушел" . Если он ушел то почему "родителям?" нужно тогда "матери я не нужен"

Originally posted by 🔰Алисаман🔰:

Это еще не все. У ГГ тоже странности в личной жизни. То "родителям я не нужен", то "отец тоже от нас с мамой ушел" . Если он ушел то почему "родителям?" нужно тогда "матери я не нужен"

Ну лично по моему видению родственных связей, ушедший отец - всё равно отец, да и можно сказать, что ему гг тоже не нужен, учитывая данный момент из жизни.

Субъективщина, по большому счету.

Может быть. По моему мнению данный разговор "по душам" все равно нужно доработать. Все 5 дней ГГ словно альфасамец крут, весел, задорен. Четкий парень. А тут в соплю превращается, едва не плача о том что он никому не нужен. Словом мнение о ГГ сразу падает...

Originally posted by 🔰Алисаман🔰:

Может быть. По моему мнению данный разговор "по душам" все равно нужно доработать. Все 5 дней ГГ словно альфасамец крут, весел, задорен. Четкий парень. А тут в соплю превращается, едва не плача о том что он никому не нужен. Словом мнение о ГГ сразу падает...

Такой момент есть. В принципе, чисто с точки зрения психологии человека - даже самый крутой, с виду, человек, имеет собственных тараканов. Провести аналогию с Леной из ваниллы: та же маска, ток в обратную сторону - гг может строить из себя хоть супермена, но слабости есть у всех, и каждый переживает какой-то момент по своему. Но, в принципе, в некоторых моментах ты прав - можно сделать поменьше соплей со стороны гг.

это ваше видение ситуации. Я сомневаюсь что будет много претензий к данной части. 90% даже не заметят подобных нюансов. Можно не переделывать, хуже не будет. Просто прочитав пару сотен модов подобные "не состыковки" будут бросаться в глаза сразу.