Popularity text: "Livings fear the Vampires for a good reason, but if we give them enough reason to serve us, they'll follow us eventually. \\n\\n As your popularity increases, Empire factions will like you more, your realm will be more stable, and you're more likely to receive Elector Count State Troops." - Could instead be: The living fear Vampires for a good reason, but if we give them enough reason to serve us, they'll follow us eventually. \\n\\n As your popularity increases, Empire factions will like you more, your realm will be more stable, and you're more likely to receive Elector Count State Troops.

Vampiric Influence text: "Vampires can permeate mortal societies and inveigle themselves into high societies of the living. Slowly, they'll subvert those in true power, and control the nation itself." - to: Vampires can infiltrate mortal society and inveigle themselves into high social positions amongst the the living. Slowly, they'll subvert those in true power, and control the nation itself."

"Now the commoners are backing the deal. However, to formally ascend into immortal emperor, you need the approval of all elector counts. Gain approval from them by force or persuasion." to: Now the commoners are backing the deal. However, to formally ascend to Immortal Emperor, you need the approval of all elector counts. Gain approval from them by force or persuasion.

"Not interested" to: "Discreditable" or "Disreputable"

Not interested text: "Isn't he kinda already dead?" to: Imperial citizens regard us with nothing more than woeful suspicion.

Alternative to above suggestion: Our past history with the people of the Empire does not paint us in a convincing fashion.

Elector Count of Sylvania (40) text: "The empire acknowledged our contribution and gave a token of gratitude." to: The Empire has acknowledged our contributions and given a token of gratitude.

Protector of the Empire (60) test: "We're the protector of the Empire, not the feeble living ones." to "We are the proven protector of the Empire, unlike the feeble living ones."

"Scourge of the Emperor’s Foes (80)" to: Scourge of the Empire's Foes (80)

Scourge of the Emperor’s Foes (80) text: "Our valours are spoken in every household across the Empire and its accomplishment will be known as legendary folk heroes!" to: Our valourous deeds are spoken in every household across the Empire and our heroic accomplishments will be marked as legendary amongst the common folk!

The True Emperor (100) text: "Now there is no doubt. Vlad von Carstein is the only true and right emperor!" to: Now there is no doubt. Vlad von Carstein is the only true and rightful emperor!

"Recruit rank: +4 for all Imperial Troops and raise deads" to Recruit rank: +4 for all Imperial Troops and raise dead units

"Exert your influence to seize control of this faction, turning them into a loyal [[img:icon_vassal]][[/img]]vassal. The target faction must have reached 100% [[img:icon_blood_kiss]][[/img]]vampiric Influence. The total [[img:icon_blood_kis]][[/img]]vampiric influence required to reach this threshold depends on the target’s race and number of settlements." - Typo in last sentence, icon_blood_kis should be icon_blood_kiss

Maybe replace any mentions of "the True Emperor" with "the Immortal Emperor" (Vlad himself being a vampire and his ring letting him resurrect in lore). Though I have seen you already mention this in a few places.

Also could rename "the foul" to empire's enemies or empire's adversaries