Originally posted by MegaRed #DMG4LIFE:

Hey, I just wanted to give you some feedback based on a short look at your map.
I won´t give feedback about gameplay, because I didn´t played it with other players.
It´s all about the design. And I want to let you know that I don´t know the original map.

But first of all: Good job dude! This map looks awesome!
But there are also some parts you may have to rework.

Here´s my list:

• AT-Spawn: Ladder and wood thing (hope you know what I mean) aren´t solid (you can walk through.
  
• B-Bombside: you can still sit at the balcony.
  
• Playground: glass sound when you shoot wood + maybe a missing railing
  
• T-Stairs: Invisible wall :(
  
• Atrium: missing texture at the bottom of the window
  
• Street: Jump where you can get on a roof Picture[img5.fotos-hochladen.net]
  
• Veranda/Piazza: A missplaced little window?
  
• T-Spawn: missing texture at the windows (if u boost a mate up on the little roof)

Hope you can understand everything :) If you still have questions feel free to ask ^^

Greetings
MegaRed

Thank you very much. I'm from Russia, not easy for me to translate correctly the whole meaning of your words. Please attach a picture of problem areas. I'll fix.

Just posted them here: >>>Link<<<[imgur.com]

thank you. There is?

-shutters on the back side there is no texture - so conceived (optimization)
-Atrium. no textures (optimization). There can not be) Fixed
-an invisible wall. In origenale there is no passage. This is not the gameplay area. fix logic
-(B-Spot) there can not be. I'll fix
-staircase to the roof not solid. There can not be located. then fix

I guess this is a pretty minor thing, most maps seem to use the SAS nowadays. It seems like this map would be a good candidate for the GSG9 or the GIGN, just to give greater player model balance among the community maps.

I know nothing about the ubiquitous SAS on the cards. My map is not concerned

I really like this map. But I don't like all the invisible walls. There are many places where it looks like you would be able to get through. Especially the one near t-spawn, a clear hallway should be able to walk through.

ok

I think some fences can help out with the invisible wall

Ainda vo testa-lo assim q testar dou meu real feedback.

Originally posted by Altair_Junior:

Ainda vo testa-lo assim q testar dou meu real feedback.

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Hi i really love your remake of de_torn! it just feels like in CS1.6
I have some feedback for you. The graphic of the map looks very nice.

In the atrium there is one texture very bad connected to another, it does not look so good... maybe you want to change it in the future
https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=422292376
https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=422292288

The Bombspot signs destroy the atmosphere on this map.. maybe you design new signs
https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=422292422

On bomb-spot A the sound of water is missing when you walk over the water, please fix
https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=422292512

At the well near B (Village) there is no sound. I liked the sound of the well in CS1.6 maybe you add it.
https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=422292470

I think that the pink textures dont look good. Maybe it is realistic but its not beautiful.
https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=422292556
https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=422292602
https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=422292649

Add more sounds like in CS1.6


I really love this map! If you change all this, it will be perfect for me! Thank you for this map!

I have found more things.

The original map takes place in a city caled Bahçelievler in Turkey. So a sign like this doesnt make sense at all..
https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=422302300

This also does look strange...
https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=422302243

Originally posted by Echter Edgar Wasser Fan:

I have found more things.

The original map takes place in a city caled Bahçelievler in Turkey. So a sign like this doesnt make sense at all..
https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=422302300

This also does look strange...
https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=422302243

this is Torntown, it is not de_torn. This is a remake. Venue - Yugoslavia in 1999. de_torntown independent map, with its textures, decals, sounds, soul and atmosphere ... Thank you for your comments