Tabletop Simulator

Tabletop Simulator

Heat: Pedal to the Metal + Heat: Heavy Rain
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BombardToo 22 Jul, 2024 @ 5:17pm
Text Revisions
I have noticed a handful of text errors and will list all that I found so far here:



- On the Fast Start panel, "Standart" may be renamed to "Starter"
- The basic "Body" upgrade cards are titled "Suspension". The advanced "Body" upgrades do not have this error.

For the steps on a player's dashboard:
General
- The names for each step have inconsistent titles (3-rd Round, round 4, 5-th, Stage 6...). Consider making them all the same title like Step 1, Step 2, Step 3...
Step 1
- Consider discoloring "+2 and -2" and making "spending Heat" the same color.
- The sentence "You may not shift gears." feels like it either ends too early or is unnecessary to include. You may have meant to write "You cannot shift 2 gears if you do not have Heat in your Engine."
Step 2
- The phrase "...into the closed hand." may be reworded as "...in your play area face-down".
- Add "All cards can be played except for Heat cards."
- Consider swapping "Number of cards = Gear" to "Gear = Number of cards".
Step 3
- For this step and onward, consider coloring the term "Speed".
- Add "The script will automatically flip cards until one Speed card is revealed for each Stress card and other + symbols played." after the Drive note.
Step 4
- Change "You can accelerate by +1 speed, which adds up to your speed" to "You may add 1 to your total speed".
- Write that these actions are done during Step 5.
Step 5
- Consider rewording "Now you use all cooldowns, acceleration, heat from cards played, etc." as "You can now use symbols gained from your current gear, Adrenaline, and played upgrade cards, in any order."
- Consider rewording "You may use your cool and cool" as "Cooldown: For each Cooldown you have gained, you may move one Heat card from your hand back into your Engine"
- Reword "Discard heat cards to engine, each heat card -1 cool" as "Move Heat cards from your hand to your Engine."
- The term "Accelerate" is used in place of the official "Boost" term. May be a translation error? Consider replacing this entire section with "Boost: Press the Boost button if you have at least one Heat card in your Engine and wish to flip and reveal one Speed card from your deck. If you are in a Heat control sector (green + symbol), press Free Boost instead.
Step 6
- Make "Does not add up to your speed" all the same color.
Step 7
- Make "Spend [Speed - Turn] Heat cards" all the same color.
- Add "Otherwise, pay what you can and Spin Out." in this step.
Step 8
- Capitalize Heat; color Stress.
- Remove the Clear note.
Step 9
- "Clear your play area by pressing the Clear button, then press Draw. You may choose to press Auto Draw to toggle drawing cards automatically after pressing Clear."



Hopefully this covers everything. Thank you for making this for the community! Such a fantastic revision!
Last edited by BombardToo; 22 Jul, 2024 @ 5:18pm
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ROSE  [developer] 24 Jul, 2024 @ 9:57am 
I apologise for the poor quality of the translation, unfortunately I am not an English speaker and it may be that the translator did not understand what I said to him correctly. But I am very glad that you helped me with this and thanks to you my build is even better!

Check what I have fixed, just in case, maybe I have made a mistake somewhere.
BombardToo 28 Jul, 2024 @ 2:30pm 
Originally posted by ROSE:
I apologise for the poor quality of the translation, unfortunately I am not an English speaker and it may be that the translator did not understand what I said to him correctly. But I am very glad that you helped me with this and thanks to you my build is even better!

Check what I have fixed, just in case, maybe I have made a mistake somewhere.
Thank you for taking my post into consideration! I have noticed a repeating phrase in Step 5 "...you may move one Heat card from your hand back into your Engine (Move Heat cards from your hand to your Engine.)" The one in parenthesis can be removed entirely; that is a mistake on my part.
Once again, you are amazing for creating this!
ROSE  [developer] 18 Aug, 2024 @ 12:52pm 
I did
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