I think it is not bad at all! The fact that you can smoke from everywhere and the skybox being so high is a problem de_inferno faces too. I know it is intented, but you should overthink it. Inferno is hated for such reason.

http://imgur.com/a/Qat7I#10

The number of the album is in order with my points:

1. You think you can jump on many objectives on the map. Just make the boxes higher so players won't get confused.
2. You can't jump on the ladder, why do you implement it there?
4. Try to find another solution to blocking camping position, that does not look good.
5. That does not look good either. Also it causes shadow errors.
6. I dont like vastly open places. Try to use it differently or delete it.
7. Way too bright, obviosly.
8. That doesn't look good. Dont try to make decoration through terriar.
9. What is dis?
10. What is DIS? Way too bright.
11. Shadow errors?