Dota 2
Crested Echoes Aria
My honest opinion
Anuxi - I hope you read this.

Don't get me wrong because you made good sets in the past, like Featherfall or Mirana's set with the owl mount but this is not very good. I consider Featherfall set one of the pinnacles of hatmaking. But let's talk about this instead: Concept-wise, looks very promising; execution-wise, not very good. The dark purple shade doesn't really fit and there are too much cluttering small details. The cape would look much better if it was a full, thick cape. In the GIF, it looks like a scrappy piece of sandpaper in the wind, because the engine is too limited for thin polygons to look decent. Hair looks unnatural with the bang in the middle of her face, because without physics it's just stuck there like someone slapped a wig made of wax on her head. Without the bang, it's much better - and please give us an option to get rid of the head ornament also. The cloth extension on the belt attachment can be shortened a bit. If the engine can't render or animate it well in real-time, it's better off to keep it simple than attempt to bite more than you could chew. In its current iteration, I give it 5/10. Hope you can take this constructive criticism and improve before this hits the store. :g:
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Anuxi♥  [developer] 6 May, 2015 @ 8:00pm 
Dude your feedback is super awesome. I agree on many of your points. I won't be changing the set as it is now, but I'll try to keep your feedback in mind when I next make items :)

Thanks so much for taking your own time to spend writing about how to help me improve. I really appreciate it, mainly cause time is very precious, and you spent it helping me <3
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