Я понял тебя.
Буду сильно благодарен за эту помощь.

Второй день, столовая. Во всю Щёл прием пиши. Я приЩел к выводу.
Разговор с Алисой и Мику, Мику говорит: " Ты с Ульянкой носишся"
На выходе из столовой размышления Шурика, Попосту.
Разговор с Электроником: " Боишся подойти"
При разговоре на поле с Ульяной: " Того Шурика на поле не затишить" Не знаю какое слово хотел использовать Автор, скорее всего затащить.
При разговоре на площади со Славей: " Ты тут маешся"
Пытаешся, неприкрасный, всеж, стараешся. Эти слова не запомнил откуда.
И какая фамилия у Семена должна быть? Когда Шурик читает список там написан: " Семен Семперсунов"
Маленькие ошибки, после точек пишется то маленькая буква или слово.
Фух, надеюсь я вам помог!

Чёрт, такие ошибки...
Спасибо, это большая помощь.

На Github загрузите проект, я там поправлю и реквест пульну - так быстрее будет.

https://github.com/AlexDon123/-.
Как посоветовали выше!

вылет в -3 дне.в столовой когда разговариваю с славей

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While loading <'Image' 'blpi/images/bg/ext_houses_day.jpg'>:
File "C:/Program Files (x86)/Steam/steamapps/workshop/content/331470/503341838/game/script.rpy", line 674, in script
"Неспешно,{w} дыша свежим воздухом и любуясь небом,{w} я шёл на площадь.{w} В голове было столько мыслей.{w}
IOError: Couldn't find file 'blpi/images/bg/ext_houses_day.jpg'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 277, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\main.py", line 478, in main
run(restart)
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\main.py", line 141, in run
renpy.execution.run_context(True)
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\execution.py", line 731, in run_context
context.run()
File "C:/Program Files (x86)/Steam/steamapps/workshop/content/331470/503341838/game/script.rpy", line 674, in script
"Неспешно,{w} дыша свежим воздухом и любуясь небом,{w} я шёл на площадь.{w} В голове было столько мыслей.{w}
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\ast.py", line 604, in execute
renpy.exports.say(who, what, interact=self.interact)
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\exports.py", line 1123, in say
who(what, interact=interact)
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\character.py", line 841, in __call__
self.do_display(who, what, cb_args=self.cb_args, **display_args)
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\character.py", line 690, in do_display
**display_args)
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\character.py", line 493, in display_say
rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='say', type=type, roll_forward=roll_forward)
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\ui.py", line 277, in interact
rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\display\core.py", line 2425, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, **kwargs)
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\display\core.py", line 2779, in interact_core
self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\display\core.py", line 1848, in draw_screen
renpy.config.screen_height,
File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 416, in renpy.display.render.render_screen (gen\renpy.display.render.c:6685)
rv = render(root, width, height, 0, 0)
File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 185, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2857)
rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\display\layout.py", line 649, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 103, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3319)
cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):
File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 185, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2857)
rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\display\layout.py", line 649, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 103, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3319)
cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):
File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 185, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2857)
rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\display\layout.py", line 649, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 103, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3319)
cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):
File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 185, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2857)
rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
File "renpy/display/accelerator.pyx", line 104, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render (gen\renpy.display.accelerator.c:1965)
cr = render(child, widtho, heighto, st - self.child_st_base, at)
File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 185, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2857)
rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\display\image.py", line 261, in render
return wrap_render(self.target, width, height, st, at)
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\display\image.py", line 124, in wrap_render
rend = render(child, w, h, st, at)
File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 103, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3319)
cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):
File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 185, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2857)
rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\display\im.py", line 478, in render
im = cache.get(self)
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\display\im.py", line 200, in get
surf = image.load()
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\display\im.py", line 529, in load
surf = renpy.display.pgrender.load_image(renpy.loader.load(self.filename), self.filename)
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\loader.py", line 533, in load
raise IOError("Couldn't find file '%s'." % name)
IOError: Couldn't find file 'blpi/images/bg/ext_houses_day.jpg'.

Windows-7-6.1.7601-SP1
Ren'Py 6.99.10.1227
Everlasting Summer 1.2

Хммм...странно. По всей видимости у тебя что-то с игрой, посколько мод ссылается на внутренние ресурсы (спрайты, музыка и тд.)

Вот это вылезает, когда пытаюсь запустить игру:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
ScriptError: Name u'day_10' is defined twice, at C:/Program Files (x86)/Steam/steamapps/workshop/content/331470/503341838/game/Day10.rpy:1 and C:/Program Files (x86)/Steam/steamapps/workshop/content/331470/503341838/shurick/game/Day10.rpy:1.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 277, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\main.py", line 360, in main
renpy.game.script.load_script() # sets renpy.game.script.
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\script.py", line 259, in load_script
self.load_appropriate_file(".rpyc", ".rpy", dir, fn, initcode)
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\script.py", line 738, in load_appropriate_file
self.finish_load(stmts, initcode, filename=fn + source)
File "C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Everlasting Summer\renpy\script.py", line 414, in finish_load
bad_node.filename, bad_node.linenumber))
ScriptError: Name u'day_10' is defined twice, at C:/Program Files (x86)/Steam/steamapps/workshop/content/331470/503341838/game/Day10.rpy:1 and C:/Program Files (x86)/Steam/steamapps/workshop/content/331470/503341838/shurick/game/Day10.rpy:1.

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 6.99.10.1227

Удали всё кроме папки "shurick"
Стим продублировал мод, вот отсюда и ошибка