ARK: Survival Evolved

ARK: Survival Evolved

GlassMetal
Gumballz 20 Apr, 2016 @ 8:16am
Critique/suggestions to help you win..
Very nice looking mod.

Hope you don't take the following as criticism, rather as critique in hopes of helping you win the contest :)


Middle support on stairs not aligned with middle support on ceiling 1
http://i.imgur.com/rD577GP.jpg

No Collision detection needed on all structures
http://i.imgur.com/eCaQjoj.jpg

Add Greenhouse effect to all structures
http://i.imgur.com/CDoMfj7.jpg

Doors sunk into ceilings/foundations
http://i.imgur.com/vYxrpPt.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/bWVTbto.jpg

Walls not laying flush on top of existing door frames.
Not sure you can do much against existing greenhouse frames but metal frames should be able to align better.
http://i.imgur.com/vQ5qR0b.jpg

Adjust support on ceiling 1 to remove double support effect when ceilings placed together.
Support on stairs would need altering to match too. As would Sloped Roof 1
http://i.imgur.com/wLhmMfL.jpg

Possible to have rivets go through the glass rather than just a rivet head on top ?
http://i.imgur.com/FpZj8OK.png
If not. Remove rivets to match Foundations look, or add rivets to foundation too.
http://i.imgur.com/AhTO6kG.jpg


Adjust round supports on Ceiling 3 4 and 5. Use half cylinders on the outside edges to give a solid cylinder effect when 2 ceilings placed together.
Same for Wall 1 and wall 2
http://i.imgur.com/HMoAEFJ.png
http://i.imgur.com/AVSAFdo.jpg

If you do adjust wall 1 and 2. you may need to alter the diameter of cylinder to match thickness of other walls (or make a duplicate of walls 1 and 2 and make those half cylinders)
http://i.imgur.com/0qf1qHo.jpg

Possible to adjust (or add) snap points to Foundations so ceilings can snap cleanly to them when needed ?
http://i.imgur.com/LTKFVV1.png

Snap Points on ramps needs fixing
http://i.imgur.com/VRXcr6G.png
http://i.imgur.com/DA1HJx2.png

Snap Points on Pillars 1 and 2 need adjusting
http://i.imgur.com/2Kt5NPK.png

Ceiling 1 maybe in need of cropping. Only noticed this when left/right roof was placed. So could be those causing the effect.
http://i.imgur.com/77kHiTa.jpg

Sloped Roof 1 needs work. Walls Sticking through bottom edge.
May wish to consider removing the outer edge of roof to doesn't stick though walls
http://i.imgur.com/kCA6OxR.png
http://i.imgur.com/ZvZFT1o.png


Hope it helps you out.
Gumballz