I like the rose design being subtle. It looks like it was a professional job, created before the parts were even assembled and not just 'etched' in by a hillbilly with a switchblade like other creators seem to do terribly.
The weird fire design is being over used, I think only that little small bit on top of the middle part should be the only part with the weird fire design.
The white part just looks ugly. The grey is clashing with the white.
I was not able to see the little gold dots from a far. If I did not zoom into the picture, I would have never even noticed it was there.
White on brown is a strange choice. Are you like painting a barn or something?
I personally dont like the look of the 'sight' part having two gold dots that you look between.
It would be cool if there was another wood drawing of a ladies hand with fingernails was grabbing the bottom of the gun under the gold line part. I really enjoy the wood work and would like to see more of it.
I am not really sure what to with the gold aesthetic, maybe try to keep it all in one area and add some gold to the brown part where the handle starts. I am thinking a gold line going straight down from where the handle begins to the bottom and then maybe adding smaller lines on it that run perpendicular and 'fow' up the gun. If that description makes any sense.
I would move the gold line up the barrel a little bit and have spikes on one side and other spikes that dont line up on the other side.
As for that 'handle'? or 'grip'? Idk what that is, I dont know gun parts, the white part on the end of the gun, It could blend better into the brown part. The slightly darker white 'edge' of the middle part mixes well with the brown color, make the white on the end look like that.