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Under "Academy" in the traditions screen:
In English, non-proper nouns (like school or university) are not capitalized unless they are the first word in the sentence or part of a title.
Should say "Academies, schools, and universities are spread across our empire. Those that wish to reach the top must do so through their intricate hierarchies."
Under "Public Education"
It reads "We ensures..." but should say "We can ensure" and I recommend just having it say "We can ensure a basic level of education of all citizens" at the end.
Under "Mandatory Public Education"
It reads "all our citizen" and should say "all our citizens".
It reads "is executed" but should say "are executed".
Under "Military Schools"
It reads "a throughout..." and should say "a thorough..." (thorough and those th words are some of the hardest words in English and a lot of native speakers get confused on those too).
It reads "navies an armies" and should say "navies and armies".
Under "Learn, Unlearn, and Relearn"
It reads "We value learning, not only for the knowledge but for the process itself"
It should say "We value learning, not only for the knowledge, but for the process itself"
It reads: "it makes our leader...". It should say "it makes our leaders".
Under "Administratum"
If this is a clever reference to the joke element that M.I.T "discovered", please leave it in!
If this isn't a clever reference, it should say "Administration".
It reads: "They are those that oversee..." you can shorten that to just "They oversee"
Under "Streamlined Recruitment Process"
It reads "Due to the vast number of recruits that are needed for our empire we cannot retain our old recruitment process".
It should say "Due to the vast number of recruits needed for our empire, we cannot retain our old recruitment process".
Under "Efficient Bureaucracy ":
It reads "The expanding bureaucracy threatens slowing down the efficiency of our administration"
It should say "The expanding bureaucracy threatens to slow down the efficiency of our administration"
Under "standardized Planetary Administration"
It reads "We control a large number of planets and as our empire grows their administrations are at risk of diverging"
It should say "As we control more planets, our administrations are at risk of diverging"
Under "Meritocratic Promotion Policies"
I suggest having it say "Politics, intrigue, and petty quells used to affect who gets promoted"
Bureau of Oversight:
it says "its" and should say "it's" (the Bureau possesses employees)
Under "Aesthetics"
I suggest "Beauty can be perceived but no explained. Without beauty, our existence in the galaxy would be hollow"
Under works of literature:
"enlighten billion" should be "enlighten billions".
I suggest: "Once a piece is finished, it will last an eternity, it will make the galaxy a better place everyday"
Under guilds of Artists:
I suggest "...collects the most skilled in the empire, they lend themselves to the greater good"
When you open the mod folder open the localisation folder, then english. In there there are several text documents.
est_misc... contains a little bit of everything (edicts etc). est_modifiers... contains text for modifiers.
The main one is est_traditions which contains the info for all the traditions.
(the last three is mostly repetitive stuff for a few traditions that require a lot of localisation).
Each tradition have three entries like:
tr_est_academy_1:0 "Public Education"
tr_est_academy_1_desc:0 "§YEmpire Leader Pool Size§! increased by §Y3§!."
tr_est_academy_1_delayed:0 "Education is a right..."
The first is the name, the second is the description of what it actually does and finally the last is the "lore description".
Some extra info (that you do not really need, but might be nice to know when looking at the documents.
-Surrounding text with §Y ... §! colours that text (Y=yellow, G=green, R=red etc.)
-Starting with a £ lets be insert symbol. E.g. £food is the food symbol, £pop is a pop symbol.
(these two are not important when reading lore text)
-Writing $tr_est_academy_1$ copies in the text stored in that entry. In this case $tr_est_academy_1$ will copy in the text "Public Education". Used for a few repeat entries.
Finally every tradition tree have a starter entry like:
tradition_est_academy:0 "Academy"
tradition_est_academy_desc:0 "Academies, schools and ..."
tr_est_academy_adopt:0 "Academy Traditions"
tr_est_academy_adopt_desc:0 "$tradition_est_academy_desc$\n\n$tr_est_academy_adopt_effect$\n\n$tr_est_academy_finish_effect$"
tr_est_academy_adopt_effect:0 "§E$TRADITIONS_ADOPT$:§!\n§YEmpire Leader Capacity§! increased by §Y2§!."
Here the first one is the display name of the tradition tree, the second a lore description, the third you do not need to are about (just ties stuff together). The fourth is the effect of adopting that tradition.
I thought it might be easier for you, as a dev, to have the original YAML file with suggested edits already in the right place rather than coming here and transposing them out of comments, so
I created a github repo with the est_traditions_l_english.yml file in it. I'm slowly going through making edits to the text for both grammar and flavor. Of course, I'm not modifying any values or mechanics of the traditions.
So far I've done Academy, Shroudborn, and Hacking. I hope you find my suggestions helpful, but if you don't that's ok too :) I'm easy-going.
https://github.com/Rokhmal-Stellaris/Expanded_Stellaris_Traditions
Is that something anyone with a Github account can edit? I have a few suggestions/corrections to make.
You should be able to fork it and use the pull request method.
https://github.com/Seris02/Expanded-Traditions-Fix