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DR.Circle 14 Aug, 2014 @ 12:31pm

Looking for a writer for a SFM short.

The reason why i'm posting this is because i'm looking for a writer to write a script for a SFM short.

The story is to show how much people could/would change throughout a zombie apocolypse.

if the English isn't good grammar wise then i'm sorry. English is not my native language.

EDIT. i change the Rape like part because it would might be to much to handle for some people. i hope you like the change better now.

The crew is sitting in a bar (l4d1 characters) drinking some beers. zoey decides to go to be and francis soon folows her. francis grabs her butt and zoey push him away saying "what the hell!" francis proceeds to grab her and push her into the wall(the head hits first). he then throw her on the ground. zoey screams wich makes rochelle/lois and bill respond and run in to help zoey. Bill kicks francis in the middle of the torso wich makes him fall to the gound. Francis tries to get up while holding his hand on his ribs but bill keeps him down by punching him in the face while yelling "whats the matter with you francis". Rochelle/Louis helps zoey up and out of the room while she's crying (something i don't know).

Things i've animated:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XXN0ZIu0yL8&list=UUW7tTyBaKFDihwIXXTtmdqQ

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eRnCf3454_8&list=UUW7tTyBaKFDihwIXXTtmdqQ

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KYetZPLWdec&list=UUW7tTyBaKFDihwIXXTtmdqQ

this will be something i will start on after the saxxy awards

Last edited by DR.Circle; 4 Sep, 2014 @ 7:46am

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Dayman 14 Aug, 2014 @ 6:00pm

this seems a little overly-peverted where it dosent actually show you the devastating effects of the zombie apocolypse on the characters.I suggest that you create a more emo. sfm loll

DR.Circle 15 Aug, 2014 @ 6:07am

Originally posted by TheIllogicalGentleman:
this seems a little overly-peverted where it dosent actually show you the devastating effects of the zombie apocolypse on the characters.I suggest that you create a more emo. sfm loll

i'm looking for a writer to make it that way TheIllogicalGentleman. this is just an example

Deadflag 18 Aug, 2014 @ 2:25pm

That's a perfectly fine example of the devastating effects of a zombie apocalypse on the characters, if not the epitome of an example. After a zombie apocalypse, the question is how long it'll take for us to lose our humanity as well, rape and murder are things that should be way more prevalent in zombie films, people are disgusting creatures.

Venator Vicain 18 Aug, 2014 @ 11:18pm

Originally posted by Alexis:
That's a perfectly fine example of the devastating effects of a zombie apocalypse on the characters, if not the epitome of an example. After a zombie apocalypse, the question is how long it'll take for us to lose our humanity as well, rape and murder are things that should be way more prevalent in zombie films, people are disgusting creatures.

I disagree. Indeed, order and security will have been thrown to the wind in a zombie apocalypse, but I'd highly doubt the epitome of a perfect example would become manifested into that of murder and rape in every scenario. Not all people would (realistically) devolve into that, but I don't doubt some would.

There are many variables to refer to here. What type of zombie apocalypse are these characters going through? In L4D lore, there aren't any zombies at all, they're merely infected/mutated individuals from an airborne virus spread from person to person (this being the reason for why the chopper pilot always dies in-game, as YOU infect him). In TLOU, infected individuals are rudimentarily kept away by the military forces, as they've disbanded the government to take control of the situation.

Bandit groups, lone wolves, the classic "closely-knit survivor group", and other such organizations can come of it.

Heck, even cannibals. People can certainly change in life/death situations.