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Enki Soruz † 7 Nov, 2015 @ 9:31pm
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Hello SourceFilmMakers, I have been making some Posters for friends and practicing to get better and at sfm, but i feel like i'm missing something or not doing something very correctly, so i'm asking for your opinion about some of my work.

I don't want to be "Professional" at sfm, just good enough to be acceptable in the community.

Here some of my works:

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=543070442

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=541765586

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=534728436

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=515474145

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=506541031

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=478422580

https://steamhost.cn/steamcommunity_com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=463799603

The top ones are the most recent, so i want to know what you guys think about them, and how can i improve my work. Tips and reviews are welcome, and thanks for reading.
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azerty 7 Nov, 2015 @ 9:32pm 
Not too shabby.: steambored:
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lolripk 7 Nov, 2015 @ 10:57pm 
Not bad!
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Herniated Bread 8 Nov, 2015 @ 1:17am 
Nah, you're not missing anything, they are quite nice actually. I think if you added focal distance to the mix it would be much better! Lighting is good, for posing it's amazing. I would zoom in a bit more on them though, but it's a bad habit of mine, I spam too much zoom so maybe it's just me.
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Venator Vicain 9 Nov, 2015 @ 6:16am 
Pull lights away from the targets so the polys don't corrode in reaction.

Use different camera lenses (FOVs) and positioning to achieve a better mood.

Lighting is simple, but that comes to people over time. Learn what the sliders do so you can use them to greater effect.

Specifically in the case of the topmost picture, decrease the camera FOV and pan in a bit. There's too much empty space around the room, and not enough focus on the subject.

And:

The ponies. Please. ;_;

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