reminds me of clean cry of fear.

hey continue making shootout maps industrial was fun

Thanks for the feedback! I'll see what I can do if I revisit this (again). There's definitely some things that I could fix.

Hi Startacker!
I played on your map and it has some problems. The idea and the concept is
actually not bad, but the exicution was poor, here's why:

-The lighning you done at the beginning lobby is horrible, it's so bright it burns my eyes out.
-The soundscape is just doesn't fit. imo this map should give you the feeling of being alone
in and abandoned building in the middle of the forest. Now, the radio chatter, alarm and
the helicopter noise ruins that.
-It feels a bit empty. (I know this is a Gmod map, but still)
-It doesn't seem abandonedin places.
-From the outside, the building looks blocky and unrealistic, the trees outside are ugly imo.
-3d skybox isn't used properly,it doesn't match the edge of the map.
-I can't hear the rain
-Despite being night, it's too bright outside and the dark fog looks bad.

Overall, it's not that bad, just keep working on it. I seen you wrote it didn't
take more than 1 week? I wouldn't be proud of that.

Scince I'm here I can give you a little bit of an advide, or an idea perhaps.
To give the feeling of the place being abandoned, you should put garbage on the
floors, bottles, and kind of junk. Place rusty pipes, broken walls, some foliage so
it seems as if the nature wants to take back it's place. Outside area would be nice,
a little park perhaps or a playground style area. And most importantly you should
put rusty stain overlays on the walls, put barricade on the windows. You should
delete those lights, and the generator too.

Everything is possible you just have to put a little bit more effor in it!
Have a good day!
~Peredice