oh boy I can tell I'm in for a treat with this one

I would really like to know how this was made!

for gods sake add portal aimhelpers

How do I complete the puzzle immediately after I first get a portal gun?

COOL GOOD GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!

This is amazing!

muy facil y corto

Lovely atmosphere, nice unique elements. Had to noclip a lot as exact timing and resetting situations got tedious for my skill level--I do much better with logicy puzzles than execution puzzles like portal 1--but that isn't your fault.

I can't comment on the quality of the map as the map crashes Steam repeatedly even when I set graphics to as low as possible. Would downloading the maps through dropbox fix this issue?

God I love this, I've all-ways been a sucker for Aperture Science Innovators!

Crazy fun.

Ok fine. It is a timed puzzle, but I think it's a good one. The hammer skills aren't the best ones but it's better than some stuff I saw on the workshop.

Also I think the yellow and red fizzler have been done pretty well as some sort of "tutorial" here, instead of having their own tutorial chambers. I think this is one of the few good points on the map.

Also, voice acting is surprisingly good. It's a teenager sure, but it doesn't have mic noises and I can hear his voice perfectly clear. Story sounds interesting and I wanna see where it takes me.

@sdrevik What a shame you did so! This collection have very little timing puzzles. You also have to "trust" first and then just act on keypad like on normal button.

Seriously, you missed so much and even downvoted withous seeing for youself!

Couldn't figure out what the UI was for the keypad, but glad I came here and was crash's comments. I don't like "perfect timing" rooms. Glad I skipped it now. Downvote.

You can throw cube into exit door with grill when staying behind "sensor" one and get stuck forever.

I don't normally comment on Portal maps but this one has me furious right now. These aren't puzzles. It's just trial and error, and getting really good timing. If you fuck up doing something the first time, it makes getting past it 30x harder. That doesn't make a puzzle. It just causes frustration.

I appreciate the initiative of adding voice acting and custom stuff, but if you're going to go all in, you need make sure that the map in a P U Z Z L E game actually has decent puzzles to go with it. Mevious and Demon Arisen are great examples of good puzzles. I would study them if you plan on making more maps.

THIS AMAZING! How did you do the custom controls and the pings and the voices. make a behind the scences please

Very nice intro. Looking forward to the rest of the series.

@| FANTOM | Install the Portal 2 Authoring Tools in the Tools section of your Steam library. You'll get several programs, the most important of which is Hammer World Editor. From there, you can learn how to use it to create things like After Hours. Plenty of tutorials and communities exist to help you.

How did you create this map?

Good!

a lttle to reliant on timing rather than puzzle solving.

Interesting new mechanics

Timming is the key...good use of fizzers..Try my Chambers..
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Boi you predicted the nightclub GTA update

could not open the door on linux cleint

Freakin amazing dude

I dislike games where the mechanics, ie: the physical moves affected by a mouse or reflexes or split second timing prevent one from moving on when I know what is required. Just boring if I can't continue something that is not my fault so the rest of the game is left unplayed.

at first it starts stuttering a lot and the adventually crashes, i dont know if its my PC or the map though

Wow, after this first level, you boosted up with a bunch of more levels! Great Job!

AWESOME!

I think you achived number 1, with overwriting knowledge of red fizzlers.

for the final game, i would recomend changing the textures of the red fizzlers, and explaining what the orange fizzlers are.

overall, great job!

Great Start

how do i get to play after hours in portal 2? please help me with that.

nice use of tools, nice style thou i'm not that fond of the repetitive moves you have to make on parts, but thats just me. keep up the good work :o)

Pretty good! That flying to the air was like Tom when he burns...
Just a little notice that the elevator pipe is pretty long! I hope I don't need to go to the elevator like this.

I enjoyed it, these mechanics are quite unique and interesting, and I felt they were well implemented in this first map. Thumbs up!

Start is good and concept is good. But the main move if frustrating and having to repeat it is even more frustrating. I prefer puzzles you have to think about versus ninja moves that must be repeated over and over if you miss the split second window of opportunity. Hopefully in future levels the puzzles will stear away from that.

Cool idea, lovely setting and voice acting, but the puzzles are way too obscure (for me at least). The first fling alone took me around over 5 minutes, and by part 6 or 7 I was completely stumped. Some signposting could fix these issues but as of right now not very impressive design.

All objectives exceeded, in my opinion. Quite a start - looking forward to working my way through the rest. Thanks for creating.

awesome map can't wait to see more!

half the people here probaly dont play this or the game its self and give it a bad rate

Your idea is good. Can't get to portal gun because can't fling.

Retiring.
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Is OK but i don't know if u put the lamps on purpose on the sweet pot for porting. It's really annoying.

I guess after thousands of maps and puzzles it is hard to please everyone. Having said that I think this is sufficiently unique to be fresh and fun. Nice job.

So, I'm a moron, how do you open the first door?

Doesn't seem fun to me. I've seen better. Some of the mechanics are a little far fetched.

I liked it. Voice over is ok. Lets see where this is going !

@valerka273 But this mod isn't trying to be Portal Stories: Mel.

You really faked me out, there. I'm so used to BEE tests that I thought that was a force deflection field, and that the red fizzlers would kill me.