The next breaking point is at the Security Clinic where you are "given" a security badge to reach the basement only the guard to the door leading to the Basement doesn't recognize you having said security badge and you wind up fighting all the guards on the floor. When accessing the lock through the matrix the portals to beyond the initial jack-in point do not move you to the portal of next area and sets you permanently in matrix combat. Which has always been on the cusp of full alarm when you first enter any matrix whether it should be or not upon jacking-in. My best guess for the matrix problem is all IC in the clinic's system are immediately triggered upon entering the clinic's matrix locking off the associated connecting portals . So unable to reach any of the required destinations to continue the story.

Playable up to a point. You have to keep Kenny the Decker alive to progress past "meeting" Officer Green, so make sure you Import[\b] a character with plenty of trauma kits as Kenny only has 10 hp. IF you keep him alive and get out the door Kenny takes the place of Officer Green until you are able to hire a team where Officer Green the only free teammate resumes her place and Kenny disappears after you leave your hideout with your team of four.

UNPLAYABLE!!! I've played it for more than 20 times each time using different approches, still no luck! The female office does not show up at all!

Are there unlisted dependencies for this UGC?

Unplayably bugged. Which is too bad because it looks like it would be really fun if it was actually playable.

Hummm well if you would like some help translating your work I would be happy to help just contact me !

female office missing for me too... is this a dead UGC?

same problem, fem officer not appearing as well

Same here. The female lone star officer that I am supposed to talk with does not appear.

Right after the "milk run" the female lone star officer that is supposed to talk to me does not appear. I've tried reloading the level a few times with no success. Obviously this is a show stopper since I cannot proceed

I really wanted to like this but with the terrible translation and constant restarts due to bugs mean I can't really recomend it.

Salut ! Il y a depuis récemment un forum dédié à la communauté SRR francophone, donc si tu veux y faire un tour: Shadowrun Returns France[url] [srr-france.forums-rpg.com]

Every time the fox decker deals HP damage, she dies. Lame. Too frustrating to start back at the beginning of the level again, especially knowing the basement ahead is glitched as well.

208 karma maxed out rigger, I jumped into this scenario and go to the part with the trolls. It said run, so i fight and kill all the trolls and the game continues and plays it off like i did nothing, those trolls were easy for a maxed out rigger man!

same as rorgfist...

I'm trying to go to the clinic and is see where it warns me to hire a decker. but there are no deckers available for hire? what do i do

in the clinic, i am totally unable to unlock the basement, when i am in the matrix, i simply cannot enter in any gate, making progression in the adventure impossible, please, somebody help.

Bloqué dans la clinique, je n'arrive à rien dans la Matrice à part désactiver les caméras : AU SECOURS !!

I realy like this so far but in the clinic when i enter the matrix to unlock the basement, after i kill all the enemies i cant enter either of the gate things all i can do is deactivate the cameras but i cant enter either of the gates to get to other areas also i still get the enter twice bug where you get back in. could anyone help i realy want to see the end also thank you for this content.

The story seems to have a pretty solid outline, though. It has been somewhat enjoyable. I'd prefer fewer HBS characters, though.

You should really release it in French and then have someone else translate it in one swoop. Easiest way to do that is to write out your script in Word or somesuch and give that to the translator.

I hope the language gets a huge overhaul (I'm aware the author's English is poor). I'm not just talking about the spelling and grammar. The story-telling needs some work. Things like "You start to like her" as GM text is a classic example of where "Show, don't tell" is important. It also takes away from the player's control of his character by forcing responses indicating something that personal without alternative. It hurts immersion. I'm also not a big fan of LOL :) type comments (kills immersion, again) or using childish text-messaging abbreviations where they aren't appropriate (nobody says LOL in meatspace, unless they desire scorn). This is where GM text should go. <GM>Such-and-Such chuckles, sporting a huge grin.<\GM>

Ouh la la! Eh bien, Il faudra attendre que tu corriges l'écriture de ce module, par ce que en ce moment, c'est dur a lire. Un conseil: remplacer 'you' avec 'u', ce n'est pas cool.

I really enjoyed this one

Yeah, if you can get past the spelling its actually a cool story. Looks like your already getting help with that too!

Jujitsu,

You should have a group invite to where Im cleaning up your franglish :)

Jujitsu,

Im a native English speaker and are happy to help with translation work.

So far the best campaign I found. 1. There is a real storyline with a few nice twists and 2. it's by far the longest/biggest besides "Dead Mans..."!

Great, I really enjoyed and hope you'll make many others!

I really enjoyed this one. Thanks.

Well, I'm trying correct all the spelling, grammar, and flow problems to fit English better. I don't want anyone to write off a potentially enjoyable campaign just because there are writing errors due to a language difference.
I'll have the 6th text file uploaded to my dropbox when the site come back online.

I'd like to help fix the English

I really like this UGC , great work. Some minor bug, but nothing that a new load of the same location do not resolve. keep going like this

The fact that you are working on translating your work is awesome. Especially when you are doing it so others can play, and enjoy it.

@Dragoon Yeah i've learnt english in mmo's and most of time chatting with non english players.....I'll take time this week-end to try to improve the discussions.

Ah ok, English is not your first language. That explanes many of the errors. However, please correctly change the U into you. It's cool if you are working on the grammar, but that is just using dumb american lazyness. The person helping you with the translations should know better.

@manne6 I noticed this graphic bug about IC corpse not vanishing. It was the first matrix scene i created and added a lot of new teams for NPC (gangers, lonestars, IC, cameras). I understood later that the editor was full of bugs with commands issued to new teams and 90% of the bugs i encountered if not more disappeared when i used only Lonestar and gangers teams in my scenes. But to be honest i didn't wanted to rewrite whole scene to remove a minor graphic bug.

dont care too much for the language i am bad as well:)

hi like i told you in the bug report not all the ice vanished when you finish it in my case (matrix clinic )real good run lot of fun greetings and thx

awesome campaign my friend. Please say you have more in the works!

One of the best campaigns on here. Minor bugs, looking forward to seeing the next installment!

Un mod fait par un Frenchy? J'approuve, l'ami, j'approuve. Je m'en vais tester ça de suite!

Cool, glad you appreciate them. I did a couple more this morning. That same link should work.

Hah, now I'm curious about duck and oranges, never had it.

Great run had a few bugs but was able to work through them. Congrats!

"canard à l'orange" is a french cooking recipe !! (duck with oranges)

No formatting is not a problem and it's perfect for me to improve my english replacing each sentence with the correct one. Thanks a lot

I've done three so far, I'll finish some more later if I find the time. Link: https://www.dropbox.com/sh/18j254b9zmqcw0k/932uDPpucg

I hope they're good enough, and I'm sorry if my formatting screwed anything up.

Oh, I hope you don't mind, I also added lore-friendly words. I didn't think that would be a problem until I finished.

If there's an easier way to get access to the text, that would be nice as well. I had to copy-paste from the code to another notepad file to get a good look at it.

I'm pretty sure I fixed all the spelling and grammar in the first conversation, and I changed the wording around to make it flow better for English speakers. I can post it if you like. I could also message it to you or something. I haven't played the UGC, so if one of my changes isn't contextually correct, feel free to change it to make it fit.

Sorry, but I couldn't play it. A text game that uses U everywhere instead of You is just... It's not an MMO man. Take the time to type the two extra letters.

Here is a link on an english host if some people want to use maps or anything in the pack. Feel free to use
http://www28.zippyshare.com/v/94187942/file.html