but why

Better Macaw :)

ew.

Colors are very saturated and look pretty out of place in TF2, not to mention the whole team color thing that others have mentioned.

Also this might be an issue, might not (depending on how it looks after other changes are made) but in my eyes the crystal texture looks a bit too small and noisy. A scale somewhere between the current version and, say, Geo Teams might look cleaner.

I like that a lot i will see if the team will be willing to help make that. Thank you for taking the time to give me your feed back

I honestly think this would be better if it was just a single, dark purple version.
That would fix all of my issues, no gradients, team recognition still intact because no red/blue and the darkness keeps the original weapons dark grey/black recognisable, and less conflicting textures.

I was asking because i was really trying to find out how to improve it for a v2

well i'd fix the non-team-coloured red and blue versions by having them be... not red and blue
really a simple fix. just turn the red and blue versions into 1 purple version

i wouldnt have gradients

conflicting textures, i wouldnt have green. green already isnt a colour used in tf2 or on any weapons, not sure what the point of the green version in this is

you can't just respond to any criticism with "how would you fix it"

in what ways would you try to fix these issues. Like the conflict with the other texrures

No.
Red and Blue versions that aren't team coloured.
Gradients... just no.
Some textures (like the green sticky) heavily conflict with the other textures and look very out of place.
And after looking at the demo this just became 10x worse.

Well if you do think of anyway of saving it please let me know

Looks like unicorn shit, I don't think there's any saving this.

the wood has its own colormap as well that goes from lightwood to darkwood as a rare and the team and I had a lot of discussion about the gold handle and this is what we settled on. Galaxy theme is an extremely rare variant if lucky enough you could just be a nice big streak of purple or dark blue

the main barrel texture is fine, i dont know if the galaxy color scheme is it's own thing or a combination of the two, thats the only thing i dislike about it.
the main grudge i have against this is the handle. donnu if you are going for a wooden texture or something else but its a tad oversaturated in my eyes.
the golden bar doesnt go well with the handle. im fine with it.

what don't you like about it in the execution? asking for improvement

good idea, poor execution.
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This is one of the most beautiful War Paints on the workshop right now.