@Kanye East Ill definitely see about changing the animation, I made it off center to make sure she wasn't behind the menu, and to optimize the crowd as much as I could (Make it look like there are more than there really is)

The lighting I can for sure tweak with, I tried to make it look smoggy like as if they were coming out of a factory. Ill play around with it for sure though!

Good idea but in my humble opinion you can make a couple changes:

1) Give her the master animation. (you know where she's just standing there menacingly)

2) Make the scene a lot darker (not too dark but a bit darker). It's strange hearing black zone's theme while I can see lol.

3) Maybe center Haydee as if she's leading them?

Granted this is just my opinion as I find this to be a bit 'flat' in comparison to your earlier work.