Robe/coat is cool. Giant beige cloth (THAT CAN BE COLORED LIME GREEN FOR SOME REASON) is terrible. Make the shawl thing MUCH smaller if you insist on making it paintable.

Its just ugly

You should have made those yellow parts (don't know they are called) paintable.

Other then that it looks okay.

Jorney

i don't need big paintable tarp on pyro's shoulder

It feels like sombeody threw at towel on Pyro and he never bothered to take it down.

For someone's first jab at a cosmetic? I'd honestly say that this is a solid first attempt, especially for a coat item of all things!

Like everyone's saying, getting more promotional material in for future works wold definitely be a good idea; it can be as simple as getting some loadout examples together to getting some SFM/Blender renders sorted.

Other than that, I look forward to see what else you create moving forward

More promotional art, with this while using other head replacement cosmetics, would be welcome, I fear that the scarf is way too high up and might clip through most of them

I agree with what Moon just said, the ends shouldn't be perfectly new. Either make them burnt up, torn, or shredded.

A very solid cosmetic, idk why I like it so much, but I just do.

the scarf could have burned sparkles at the end, or be torn

Overall, the cosmetic looks engaging. The only slight nitpick I'd say is maybe to give the scarf a different texture, but overall just a good cosmetic. I can see many players wearing this cosmetic if given the chance.

I feel the presentation images could use some work. Looks great over all though! Though I feel the scarf/cloth pauldron could do with a different color. maybe a darker team color?

You really need to improve your presentation/promotional art, this isn't it man

Not a bad idea. Just that the scarf could use a toutch up. Make it thinner and look less like an Elizabethan Collar. The scarf could also bennfit from being a shade of orange.

now that i can get a better look at it, i think the scarf needs more detail, paint strokes and what-not

@trauma It doesn't change the silhouette that much. The only thing that needs to be changed is the color of a scarf. Either make it darker, brown or cream spirit colored (orange/yellow)

This actually looks pretty damn good. I'd definitely use it!

I like it but the white cloth is not team colored. the shades of white you used on the neck cloth, clash with the rest of the jacket. I recommend making it team colored. also the missing belt grenade on the chest affect the pyro silhouette.

Just no. Looks great, but adds too much, changes the silhouette of the class too much. This isn't tf2

cool first item but yeah you should have your images ready to go next time cause stuff on the workshop looses traction pretty fast so gotta have your best foot forward to prolong it

yeah, i uploaded this at 4am I eepy. Planning on adding more soon

this is a great cosmetic I just think your presentation of it is a little off

Hey man, we need more pics of this. I wanna know how it looks with other cosmetics or how it looks from behind and what-not