well, I appreciate the idea very much, I believe you know precisely what you want to show, yet struggle to show
please exercise more with scripts for I love the concept that you attempt to bring, yet it is rather mediocre in its current state

PREY I is much more finished, PREY II is unpolished and requires a lot of care and technique that you have yet to figure out (based on your craft)

I'll deerly await the full polished PREY campaign, that will be similar to CONTACT in design, aspect, feel and overall gameplay and storytelling

overall, 8.5/10 for encouragement, please make this campaign good, if you have irl work then it's understandable that you may take your time a bit further, yet otherwise please take your time and polish this story because it's magnificent!

Unfortunately

quite boring in fact ... I think you have no idea what to do next ...

I didn't think you could top the first one, but you did! Not a single enemy kill and yet the tension and claustrophobia were ratcheted right up. The questions! The confusion! And the ending: I hope that was your way of saying that you intend to do a third one!