If any of your collection gets in PLEASE let it be this one, it looks amazing

I honestly think the stripe pattern from the main texture looks fine. It helps break up the war paint so that it's not just solid colors with a bit of texturing thrown in.

Honestly if not for the detailed stripe, I think this war paint would have been fantastic.
The stripe just doesn't really work all that well. Especially on smaller models or any model whenever it gets all cut-up and inproperly looking. It really takes away from everything else in here. Makes you focus on it and go "well this looks like a glitchy mess", it takes a way from it's beauty. I know it was an attempt at making a carpet pattern but it doesn't translate all that well for detailing on a skin system of tf2's war paints.
It even makes the war paint contrasts heavily with the others within the collection. Really curious how it would look without it.