There've been quite a few hieroglyphic / rune patterns in the last few months and I think this is one of the weakest ones. A lot of other ones use smaller runes that make up a bigger pattern, which is something you did with the elite grade of this set, and I think the business that those deeper patterns make not only fits better with a rune kind of idea but also grabs your attention so that you don't notice as much how much the texture can get cut up. On this, the symbols are huge and get cut off a lot so that they look really jarring.

Honestly I think the little bit of colour makes it go hard, are they full white on the alpha mask? If so then pretty epic

this one ends up being too simple and needs some more color I would have a tertiary color that is similar to the runes on the handles or scopes to make it pop more