Blu variant looks fine, Red variant could use a different color for the jacket.

too much colour make him black adn white

Actually idek why I'm arguing ya bro ur right, he's on beige team

Have you seen sniper? His jacket is the same brown color on both teams. This cosmetic adds even more team coloring than the default sniper.

yes, lets remove all of the expected snipers team color, and present with nothing but beige color, that looks nothing like red, the only team color you're left with is armband and shirt.

On red imo it seems to take a lot of the team color despite the armbands and the shirt, on blu it seems fine but on red it just removes a lot of team color.

say my name

Love it as is. Great Job!

The new version has better colors and overall an improvent of the modeling and texturing

new version of the shirt is out

comically large zips

My name is Walter Hartwell White. I live at 308 Negra Arroyo Lane, Albuquerque, New Mexico, 87104. This is my confession. If you're watching this tape, I'm probably dead, murdered by my brother-in-law Hank Schrader. Hank has been building a meth empire for over a year now and using me as his chemist. Shortly after my 50th birthday, Hank came to me with a rather, shocking proposition. He asked that I use my chemistry knowledge to cook methamphetamine, which he would then sell using his connections in the drug world. Connections that he made through his career with the DEA. I was... astounded, I... I always thought that Hank was a very moral man and I was... thrown, confused, but I was also particularly vulnerable at the time, something he knew and took advantage of. I was reeling from a cancer diagnosis that was poised to bankrupt my family. Hank took me on a ride along, and showed me just how much money even a small meth operation could make. And I was weak.

I really like the jacket

Even without the breaking bad meme, this is still a really cool cosmetic and I'd love to see it in the game!

kid named angry

You could also create something original that compliments one of the classes instead of trying to create the next meme/reference cosmetic for the crowd that will vote yes for its addition to the game because they think "oh this is a thing i recognize!" Don't you want to do better? Don't you want to be proud of what you've made instead of trying to chase a trend? It's clear you have talent but it's unfortunate that you've wasted it on such a travesty of an item.

kid named colorblind

kid named team recognition

The fact it changes the colors of the sniper a lot can make it a little hard to recognize, and I think a brown or more reddish color would be a lot better, but as is, this is completely fine.

BLU team is recognisable but RED team is a little hard to recognise. I think you should chage it to a more reddish brown.

IMO doesn't retain enough of snipers original character, the jacket colour feels off to me, team recognition is a little hampered although I do like that you kept the class emblem. and it looks from the promo images like it clips weirdly around the elbow, might just be the posing though.
decent idea executed okay, but doesn't belong in tf2.

@A Man Without A Plan Just say you don't like this set. No need of essays.

if anything this cosmetic adds MORE team color than his default model

I don't really see the team color concern, seeing as how the default vest is brown and sniper's sleeves are originally rolled up.

Joke or not, team recognition is vital, if one item without good team recognition gets by, you might not think its no big deal, before you know it, you get shit like water waders where you can make yourself almost unrecognizable. could maybe make it browner. but I get the Breaking bad reference.

Really cool but it needs a better team recognition palette, maybe coral red or orange-red rather than the sand color for RED.

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It does needs an update on the paint, as you guys already stated, cuz it's looks too bright. Hope to see an updated version, other than that solid jacket

UPDATE:

Right so now that I got a full look at the blue version I will say Team recognition shouldn't be too much of an issue, (People are free to disagree with me on this) and will quite honest, It is a very Nice coat cosmetic.

Breaking Fortress 2

Thanks man, Steam can be a silly thing at times, but I do have hopes the colors will be at least balanced out so you can tell the teams apart, If its possible to do that with vanilla Medic then this shouldn't be too much of an issue.

Thank you. The images are still being approved by steam sadly lol

since I'm posting this comment so early (Meaning its currently only one picture) I do hope there is like a balancing of the white color with the blue variant like with the medic coat otherwise I will say the white could cause some issues in game, I do like the concept but I'm pretty worried this is the only type of light color the coat will have for both teams, And This isn't me trying to be like Zesty saying "ITS TOO BRIGHT" I do like this idea and wish to offer Fair Criticism to the Cosmetic.

I'll leave an Update once more photos of this release.